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Jul 2016
I see you in the corner crying all alone,
begging and pleading with me to come home.
Telling me you've missed me and that things have changed,
And that you'll never touch alcohol again.

Although you swear you've changed I know you're telling lies,
you should learn to hide the evidnce better next time.
Because I can see empty whiskey botles on the floor,
and ***** on your shirt as well as a ***** stain by the door.

The ties to our relationship you've just managed to sever,
because you've not changed you've lost me forever.
So now as I walk away from you and everything that went wrong,
all I can do is sing this part of a good song:

'And you can cry all you want to I don't care how much you'll invest yourself in me
We're not working out'
I challenged myself to write a poem that fits perfectly around a quote from a My Chemical Romance song, Did I do well? Oh and I nicked the title off an old boyband song I used to hear all the time. Erm I am thinking of polishing up the flow of this poem as it was written when i was thirteen but i would like everyones opinion. To polish or not to polish that is the question. This is a fictional piece.
Written by
Amanda Woolley  Birmingham
(Birmingham)   
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