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Poems
May 2016
The Garden of Eden
Sometimes we try to recreate heaven on earth
Making gardens
Inventing shortcuts
Discovering secrets in and out
Looking through our numerous paths
Trying desperately to find
The perfect one
But this isn't the way to do things
Follow a straight line
If it is struggling
Find footsteps to forever follow
For eternity will you have guidance
Across the path
Unfortunately what goes up
Must come down
If you hurry
Then you are likely to trip over
Your own feet
Just remember
That shortcuts may be harmful
Never forget these words
Move slowly
And good will follow
Playing it safe will be your motto.
By Matt aged 11
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