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May 2016
Your eyes as I have always seen them                              l
More beautiful in reality than the way I dream them              y
Your eyes are oceans of endless beauty              a                  
Your eyes; ocean            i                                               ­           r    
Your skin; beach                                    y                       o                  L
Your hair; stars                         M
Your smile; moon                                             i
Your love a night watching the tide roll in            g                              
                   ­                                          D                                                                ­      
And I'm a lonely sailor             a
Storms are raging brought in by your horizons                l                        
Brutal thunderous squalls                                  n
Walls of water fall as rain                      L                      y
Tears to drown us all
                                                         f
Your eyes as I believe them                              A
More astounding than any scene from imagination
Your eyes are oceans of endless feeling
Your eyes; ocean
Your words; wind
Your heart; seagulls
Your soul; capsizing ships              
Your love a night watching the tide roll out

                       ---OCEAN AIR SUBDUE---

Your eyes are my demise              
My death is your ocean floor
Your seas are angry currents
Painful waves thrashing into rocks
And crushing my very soul
the fluff isn't meant to be understood, just to look pretty, of course it means something, but its something only understood by me
Torin
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Torin  charlotte NC
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