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The Heretic

The stranger entered through the gate He walked down Crimson Street He stopped, and all around him wait He heard the ceasing feet The stranger said, “All who are near Gather, hear my cry I have an elixir here Drink, and never die” The people looked at him and thought, “This man must be lost” Then one said, “Can it be bought? How much does it cost?” The stranger said “The price Is lower than you’d think The requirements are concise Quite simply, drink” The people said “This can’t be true! Surely it is fake! He cannot bring us immortality If we simply partake” “Hear me, please!” he cried aloud The people stared in despise He was swept up by the crowd Violence met his eyes The curtain of mercy we will today Over this scene bring down It sufficeth me to say They chased him out of town Outside the city gate he sobbed And wrung his beaten hands He was bruised, abused, robbed So he went to a different land Fifty years, few more had passed Until he returned again He hadn’t aged, this old outcast Though he lacked a single friend The people, old and weary now, From fifty years and five, Saw his face and shouted, “How! “How is he still alive?” “The elixir” he said, his voice soft And trembling with pain He thought of these people oft Though they thought him insane For their frail bodies he could not Help but shed a tear They refused before, and now they rot And still death they fear Their shaking voices he heard And his heart did sink “It’s so simple,” the man whispered, “They only had to drink”
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How slow we are to trust the purest forms of truth.

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