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Mar 2016
The Nature of Stars
There was once a sun in this chest of mine,
And oh how it warmed.
It was bright and shining,
And though it scalded me sometimes,
I loved it just the same,
For that's the nature of suns.
There was once a sun in this chest of mine,
But then it died.
It exploded within my chest,
A supernova,
Tearing me apart, devouring all it saw
Consuming breath and flesh alike.
There was once a sun in this chest of mine,
But now it's long gone.
All I have left is a hollow space,
A deep black hole in my heart,
And I try to ignore it,
As it takes all I am, leaving me hollow.
A rewrite of a previous poem
#love
#heartbreak
#rewrite
Written by
Rat
24/Non-binary/Portland, Oregon
(24/Non-binary/Portland, Oregon)
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