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Feb 2016
lustful bow tensesΒ Β 
war of lust or lust of war
mankind is groping
This is my first conscious attempt at a senryu after being inspired by several skilled writers on HP! I researched the format - it must be 5-7-5, 17 syllables, dark humor with a punch line at mankind! :) Always appreciate the feedback to improve.
Timothy Ward
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Timothy Ward  22/M/California
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