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Jan 2016
(Chorus)

Mamma can you hear me?
This is your daughter crying out
Oh holiest of mothers can't you hear?
My heart is weeping so loud  
Oh ****** mother dear
Your daughter's heart is ripping out  
Will you not save me momma?
Save me from all this pain and doubt?

(First verse)

He has left me
Abandoned me to the shore
Sailed on to new adventures
He seeks for me no more  

(Second verse )

The waves crash against me
Tearing away at my soul
He has left me hollow
I am broken now, not whole

(Third verse)*

The salt hurts my wounds
Bleeding them fresh with every kiss
How I long for his embrace
As I am made into the sea's mist
My first attempt at a song. A little sacrilegious I know especially for a Catholic like me. Be kind.... I do not know what chord to place this in. I'm thinking a minor most definitely.
Karina Norris-Veirs
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Karina Norris-Veirs  Oklahoma
(Oklahoma)   
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