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Painted Shell (unfinished)

Your mask fits well. Almost seamless, hiding the cracks that you thought made you seem-less in his eyes. The critique of a million tongues carried no voice , all but one. One with a voice so agonizing , so torturous so raw but tolerable- under the mask. You whisper your pain in the winds while drying your tears in the silk of the morning sun.
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kerdell-roberts
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Jan 4, 2016
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It's only a rough cut..should have the final within a few days or more...you're honest critique is welcomed :)

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