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ENDEAVOR

by spiritless-dreamer

proficiency is key it is knowing that while we merely live one lonely life it should at least be lived with glee so to say that you must leave is to say that you must breathe without the heavy burden that society begs and pleads for you to stay in place for it and conform to its deadly needs you must take the longer road if you are willing to succeed
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Nov 24, 2015
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could someone give me some feedback and let me know what you think the meaning of this poem is. what emotion it gives you and whether it makes sense or not?

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