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Aug 2015
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From reading the poems here

One might think that young people LIKE

to be used and abused (!)

::

They certainly write enough about it

And always seem reluctant to part with the abuser (!)

//

In fact

The famiarity of the abuse

Seems to offer a form of physcic  shelter

//

Now

This is a far cry from suggesting that they SEEK abuse

But it does suggest ( in conjunction with

The heavy instances of DEPRESSION here )

/:

That LONLINESS is thought of as worse than

A horrid relationship

/:/

This is something that the

COLLECTIVE POETIC MIND

Might find some true inspiration in exploring

And might serve as an avenue of healing
Written by
jeffrey robin
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       mazzy, NV, ---, ---, Impeccable Space Poetess and 3 others
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