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Brain in a bottle
Poems
Jul 2015
With Eyes Like Neptune
With eyes like Neptune
she carved a hole in my soul
Somehow the sun gets lost inside and freezes
Discovering your love
with a mathematical prediction
Hiding true thoughts
to avoid an friction
Weighing on my soul
like a Great Dark Spot
My love for you is like the sun
it's just ten times as hot
I don't know why
i've go to keep it bottled up inside
These unreleased overwhelming
feelings that i hide
But since your gaze has frozen over
my ever burning heart
I'll light a spark on Neptune
it's the only place to start
Look at me baby
I love you
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Brain in a bottle
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