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Jun 2015
I want to get smashed, circles decreasing, lurking was easier.
8 hours after my first post and I have been reading and liking/commenting/following others poetry and my head is spinning (not sure if in a good or bad way - have to wait until after my next few days of dream state to see if it has distilled the inputs and outputs, received and given (freely) ) - just i need to escape now - really enjoying this but the amount of emotional writing (when isnt it?) that triggers a need to respond (not a trigger for a negative/positive mental state - just the need to respond as an active observer) is quiet amazing and also how the people I read are immediately linked to my first poem here and thus the second half of the circle completes (I hope this makes sense) - even with more circles they only seem to be created within the initial circle - (thanks Wolf Spirit - I will try to remember you as an initial (good) trigger)  - I am just comparing it to how previously I just looked and never ever interacted (my fault I know - I need to apply the same principle to my waking non internet life also but baby steps and it will take decades and i will be very very very tired by then)   --- this is my first public 10w poem - I really like the format of 10w - sometimes when you leave out the words others interpretations will fill the word space differently :-))))))) cheers!!!! Can of Guinness in hand :-)))))))))
Broken Prism Prison Son
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Broken Prism Prison Son  Dublin, Eire
(Dublin, Eire)   
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