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The Beetle (a mother knows)

by carolina-p

They say you're chaos, grim, and flirty, and that the words you speak are dirty you spit vulgar, flip the birdie Creep like a callous beetle over the Earth (Or more specifically, the city) Well I said I'd slap you silly Shove your hands into dirt, nails gritty "That's what you get fer stayin' in this city. Now get yer defilin' ass back home" (What a pity) Then I'd say "Son, yer swinging high, and soon you'll be dry I've had up to here with the aches and the sighs You pack your bags while I shout with my eyes," and you don't want that, as neither do I Even so, of these things I must say clear: My worry for you is more than just fear Besides vulgar, I hear moans of tedium, my dear And so I feel life is better for you far from here Away from here, go on, away from here, from this dirty city Show then to those who say "he couldn't be" that "be" could only mean anything you'd want it to be And you'd never again "be" a creeping beetle of the city but the sonorous sliver that warms the Earth on a darkened day
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carolina-p
Published
Jun 19, 2015
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Notes

it might seem confusing, I know. I wrote this over a year ago and I think the change in conventions towards the end was intentional.

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