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May 2015
WOW !
I CAN RELATE TO THAT !

Means

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Your poem solidifies all of my

Preconceptions and prejudices

and acts as armor and protection

Against all the poets and poems

Who are trying to ****** me into

Thinking for myself and goading me on

To change my ways

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THANKS !!

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GREAT WRITE !

means

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The form of the poem was such that I was able

To avoid

Any real intrusion into my sanctuary

Of its content

I find the content of poems quite challenging

And disturbing

Like someone is trying to wake me up

And insist that

I too !

Am real .... !

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CONGRATS !

YOU MADE THE DAILY !!

Means

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a poem is just a " selfie "

Sexted to friends !

you sure looked cute in that one!

lol...... !

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( what we are really telling each other )

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Life is ******

I'm ******

You're ******

Everyone is ******

So

Let's all eat **** and die
Written by
jeffrey robin
256
   victoria, JAM, --- and SPT
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