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Apr 2015
Arms loose, by my sides sensing nothing, coated
Feet fall, in steps walked before by many soles,
City streets flow thick with cars slow-death bloated,
Eyes seek relief, from metal bright musing Soul,
In the shadows, scent and see and touch, lost worlds.
5 X 11 syllables = Landay, per today NaPoWriMo prompt
On my FB I did a more 22 syllable Landay style as 9 syllables first line and
13 second line and a picture

Landay was used by farmers and others initially and it has been made more famous in poetry by Afghani Women
Ottar
Written by
Ottar  where you will find me
(where you will find me)   
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   bex and Arlo Disarray
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