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brian mclaughlin
Poems
Jan 2015
The Great Mist
This great mist
brought on by the fog
I find myself walking within a cloud
Alone
I find myself in this is a place of peace
this place isolated
from the troubles of the world
Tranquility
The sounds of nature
that normally surround me
have grown strangely quiet
Thoughts
My mind so active
wondering where
my world has gone
Dreams
Enter my consciousness
of what life could be like
without the hate that exists in this world
Awakened
The sound of a train whistle
the closest tracks ten miles away
brings me back
Reality
Now leaving me wanting
to walk within the cloud
for eternity
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brian mclaughlin
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