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Creep
Poems
Jan 2015
Love... (response to Kiyuki Ishida's poem)
There once was a sweet boy
that lived in a dark town.
There once was a corrupted girl
that lived in a bright town.
There once was a day,
the corrupted girl escaped
this too cheery,
too vivacious town
to go fathom the overcast town.
There, she met him.
The night light in the dark,
struggling to stay lit in the depths of hell.
He lit her up like the 4th of July,
brought her new hope, new goals, new strengths,
reminded her what living was.
She swept him off his feet,
brought him back to where he belonged:
Elysium.
It was there,
that she hoped he would always remember
that she loved him
even more than he could ever imagine.
As long as he knew this,
she would be
*okay.
*shrugs* i was greatly moved by his poem, so i wrote a "response" to it... hope he doesn't mind ^^"
et monsieur right? je t'aime. <3
are you gonna be my girl
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