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My first inspiration was ***
passionate life squeezing screaming ***
the thumping wall musicality of ***
exhaustingly inventive sweaty and wet

I wanted to make it a senryu
but for duality the female characterisation
demanded two more lines
each extending to seven syllables

Arousing images captured her moaning
splashing loneliness in unusual collocation

I was first excited by the placement
of a hovering extended enjambement
to give life to my final line
whilst also considering the satisfaction
in using noisy mouthed rhythms

I believe I easily hid the wet aroused context
with a watery semantic field
suggesting she would choke and drown

So in my last line I had ‘pleasures’
as a cutting keriji to make clear
the dominating ****** context
having previously used
a preposition and determiner
to maintain duality*

Exhausted shivers
in windowed naked currents
unfolding sinking
then surfing vital wavelets
drowning screams - pleasures wet bite


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copyright©DJThomas@inbox.com 2010
I've had my share
of naked luck
but I make love
I do not ****

Don't get me wrong
I'm not unable
I simply prefer
to be strong and stable

Let my lips explore
the curves of your body
I'll start at your neck
and get more and more naughty

I'm blessed with size
I've learned technique
the foreplay alone
will bring you to the peak

I know that I'm forward
and hope not to offend
but trust me on this one
you won't have to pretend

So free up my fingers
and your wish I'll fulfill
show me what you like
and I'll bend to your will

I'll make your lips quiver
and you will arch your back
you'll be telling tales
of my skills in the sack

Don't take me for cocky
I prefer confident
and know I'm not selfish
I'll leave you content

It's not my intent
to get you on your knees
I won't aim for your eye
I aim only to please!
Sent ***** Sophia* to a beautiful friend of mine as a joke, and she responded with "You said it was gonna be *****." This was my response! I feel I really must apologize for that last line....
"let's do it."* says i one night
"no no i daren't." (pronounced "durn't") says she "m'father would be
so angry.."

the next tuesday i say:
"hey we should get together go wild and get into some ****--you might really like it!"
she says "noo.. well, maybe sometime. b-but you can't let on to my sister! oh would she be jealous of it all."
"mum's th'word" i says.
"and you can't get her to do it instead!" she cautions.
"s'alright. i like those mirrored freckles on your lip. she doesn't have those."
"okay well i daren't do it now tho."

a month later i say "well do
you wanna, donna?"

a sly smile then "how about a drink first?"
so i buy us hennessy and we drink
**** near the whole bottle
and she, real drunk now says only
"noo noo i daren't do it!!" (here bad timing chortles leerily at me with that
"oh ohh ha ha ha ... ooops!!" ****-eating grin)
while the bottle rolls round under the table.
so i pass the year away
with a few casual encounters
and
then she turns up some tuesday night on my porch with a moan sayin'
"oh i wanna!"
so of course i
did it, twice,
and she, while rubbing my belly after said:
"ohh. that really is nice!"
& so i did it once more for kicks ...
holdin' her down on that big king bed.

th'next week she comes in wearing
new leather boots/hair curled/******* overspilling
she asks
"have you ever seen la dolce vita?"
while we're sweating away
"yes."
so she gushed "oh but doesn't it show
how beautiful it really is?
the joining of two people so hot
& sacred?"

"geez." says i, "so become a catholic already."
she giggled ("you comedian!") and wanted to keep doing it again
a few times
but you know, i was quite serious.
odd daydream hashed into a meter which just flew into my head a couple days back. wouldn't leave til i put proper words to it.
 Dec 2011 michelle reicks
JL
I drank heavy from the river
To quench my parched lips
Clear cold water against my
Hands

I am always thirsty
I have broken my teeth
On the ancient rocks
To show loyalty to mother nature
I let her **** me
Without giving her my name
I let her spit in my face
To teach me humility
I let her pluck out my eyes
So I could see the color
More clearly
She stabbed a screwdriver
Into my ears
Until I heard them POP POP
So I would know the beuty of silence
I let her peel my skin
With sharpened stones
So I would know every breeze
You were not easy to me
As you tore my tongue from it's roots
So I would remeber the taste of blood
Forever
Take my fingers
Take my toes
Arms
and Legs
I am dead already
I died a long time ago
The day I was born
 Dec 2011 michelle reicks
JL
Crawl along dear afternoon
The flaming hoops I'm jumping through
I lie alone against the floor
The car is slamming on the door
You ring my bell and spill my drink
But I am already drunk I think
The taste of smell the luck of smoke
Cars are sliding down the road
Repeating reflections of red brake lights
Shining in my eyes
I am too high
To run the numbers
To poke the embers
Add some quiet
Along this street
I dream of walking down this street humming
Your arc of an arm
Around my heart
Writting our name in sidewalk chalk
Waiting for you on my bedroom floor
Wrapped in your blanket
Wishing for your skin
To make me warm
Begging on the street
For a minute of sleep
 Dec 2011 michelle reicks
JL
Your purring pheremones reach across the passenger seat and touch me with perfume flower scents
On this freeway thick covered in early morning fog
We are two shooting stars glowing as headlights repeating down the somber black asphalt river

We are going to need to find a motel soon
So I can put you down on a bed
And teach you epic ballads of a sweating sting
The ***** willow switch
Snatching up your breath
The golden raking song  of digging nails
A wet honey kiss
Tattooed as teeth marks
On my begging neck

But you tell me to keep my eyes on the road
My **** in my pants
And my searching fingers out of your lace
 Dec 2011 michelle reicks
JL
It seems I've been proved a fool again
Your saying it to me
I keep walking these same old roads again
And your driving straight to me
You hold your hand out asking for alms again
Your looking right through me
I drank the heavy smoke in straight again
Your trying to choke me
Your always trying to choke me
Always trying to **** me
Always trying to thrill me
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