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 Dec 2012 Jacobo Raymundo
Anon C
Some say love is like fire
but I disagree
fires burn out and die
some fires are hot
others cold
True love is more like water
it never dies
it never ends
it just changes
Top comment on this song. I found it so beautiful I had to share. I did not write this but I found it absolutely captivating.
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The drip of the ink
mocks the silent screams
that are crushed and sink

Deep down to the depths of the sea
The cold chills to the bone
that quivers the structure of my knees

It unlocks the vault filled with the stacks
Of the harbored wounds
That are beginning to make me crack.
See the evening colour palette?
Of fading blues and enchanting reds,
yellows, and ambers, they fall upon
the eyes. Golden in combination,
warming and enlivening to the soul.

Reminding you of some fantasy world,
where endless plains of amber grasses dance.
Where you wish your lifes short moments
could be spent for eternity with her.

T'would make the world seem inadequate,
but still, a dream doesn't die,
it ignites the flame of the soul within,
the passionate will and desire.

So gaze out! Look at the world,
immersed in the amber light
of days last light, and beauteous sunset,
that its beauty is enhanced ten-fold.
Oh this feeling, the way you make me feel
is naught but solid and true. Ever present,
and always makes me feel slightly delusional,
it sometimes falters, but is widely consistent.

Theres a shift in the weather, a difference in the air,
its something of a sweeter aroma, delightful to the senses.
Its calming, giving rise to these joyful fantasies, but they are
sometimes taken to far, so I keep them penned up behind fences.

There are adjectives plenty to describe you,
and many qualities can be ascribed to your name.
For your heart is golden, your words wise, your view
on life is positive and difficult to thoroughly maintain.

Your profound adoration for puppy, child, and rose
Is much to blame for my insane admiration of you.
Theres something about your personality that grows
increasingly in such favour of something within you thats true.

Ay, yes, Its true, theres something wonderful about you,
It sees me through the deepest swells when I am blue.
I could sit in your presence and be grieved by sorrowful news,
and still you'd bring me comfort, and remedy my bout of the blues.

Why do you hide away what beauty you possess,
don't flaunt it true, but please don't sequester it.
Make proud your heart in your beauty, as it pleases
the eye, and makes glad the soul who cherishes it.

I find myself laid low to the ground,
when your hand lowered extends out toward me.
I find myself happy and in the presence of love found
and in my arms, is the person who sees me free.

There is something in me that wants me to scream
nothing of pain and agony, but in joy and profound happiness.
For there is something in my life that whilst it may seem
temporary, is the permanent source of so much joyfulness.
 Dec 2012 Jacobo Raymundo
Anon C
She cast her eyes to the unrealistic shore
"There" Says she, "That is where I wish to be"
Whisk her away across torrential seas
Amidst squalls and high waters
Another world she wishes to exist in
A world envisioned so free of pain
Where every being has a soul mate
None feel the anguish of this life
Some would seek to call it heaven
She guesses this is an acceptable assumption
As long as we will dance
A true love for us all
No more screams of loneliness
She lets her dreams stray...
*To the shore so very far away
 Dec 2012 Jacobo Raymundo
Anon C
If I so ever felt inclined to fall again
he would have to love to dance with trees
listen to the whispers of the wind, for they tell stories
he would need to be able to embrace insanity
lets face it, the whole world is quite mad
he would have to love everyone as I do
seek to brighten their lives, if even in a mere smile
be inclined to adore fairy tales and magic
they have to exist or we would have never dreamt them
there is so much I love that I wish to share
he would have to want to share it as well
with me, with the Earth
whilst creating our own world
 Dec 2012 Jacobo Raymundo
Susie
I just want to hide with you.
Feel my life collide with you.
Close me eyes and breathe with you.
Feel our bodies' heat with you.
Smiling, laughing, crying, fighting,
want to do it all with you.
Tell me things that I don't know
show me places I won't go.
Then at the end of the day
we'll smile because we found a way.
We have secrets we can keep
Let's just sleep darling, long and deep.
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