I watched the craggy old man at the far end of the bar besiege his liver with absurd amounts of *** and Coke. It was entirely classless, like he was drinking his obsequies in plain sight of everyone. Not that ‘everyone’ amounted to much– it was a Tuesday, and there were seven lost souls scattered around Nightingale’s. Four of them were shooting pool. Big arms, tattoos, Harleys out front. Another two were puffing cigarettes through their fifties, probably talking about this ****** generation of kids and doing lines of 80’s nostalgia. A few seats from them was a loner (sporting a white braided ponytail and a rawhide vest, you know the type) sitting by himself, looking very divorced. He was engaged in conversation with the bartender, a black-haired ***** with enough experience. Occasionally he’d throw some whisky down his throat. Keeps the fire going.
But it was the sorry ******* in the corner who interested me more than anyone else, mostly because he had such blatant disregard for his own life. I watched him guzzle his eighth *** and Coke since my arrival. He was moving around so much, it was a wonder he stayed in his seat.
The light caught his addled face. You could see that maybe once he was handsome, but time had forced him to wear bad habits out. It made me wonder how. How and why.
“You know, all that Coke can’t be good for your bones,”
Awkward as hell, but it was the best I could muster. The words hung in the air, dry as scotch.
“You realla think I give a ****, dude?” he slurred. He sorta twitched when he spoke… I got the feeling he’d been at this for a while.
He belched loudly.
I let the stench of alcohol, depression, and **** excuse my hesitation.
“Well, why don’t you at least change it up a bit?”
I ordered him an old-fashioned. It really didn’t make a difference. The man was going to drink himself to death anyway. You could see it in his eyes.
He held up the drink loftily, considering it. He smiled wryly and looked at me.
“Thanks,” he said, and gulped the whisky down.
I began to grow unsure of the whole thing. Coming to this ****** pub, talking to this reeking old man… Hell, moving to Denver at all. I’d come here to forget things, but had yet to find anything of real substance to push old memories out…
He slammed his glass down heavily on the bar.
“You smoke grass?” He lobbed.
Interesting.
I followed him outside and tried hard not to be obvious as I inspected the joint he passed me. Not wet. I guess it’s fine.
“Do you live around here?” I asked, passing back the joint. The quality of **** surprised me. Strong sativa.
“If you can call this living…” answered the most depressing man in Denver.
I couldn’t take it anymore, so I just asked him.
“What’s wrong, guy? Why are you so **** sad?” I said.
“It’s really ******* stupid,” he said, turning. “It’s actually ******* insane.”
I pulled on the joint and waited for him to spill his guts.
“A long time ago,” he went on, “I was a lot different. I used to kiss all the pretty girls and make 'em cry.”
He sobered up a bit.
“But then one came along who I won’t forget. Too wild to be tamed,”
He looked down at the sidewalk and tossed the roach at it.
“Lost my ****. I rammed my car into that *****’s house and tried to take off. 'Course the five-o caught up with me and I ended up in jail with two felony counts.”
“**** dude,” I offered, “That’s crazy.”
“Yeah, I was a ******’ lunatic. Stopped caring after that. Been bouncing around ever since. Can’t get comfortable. Can’t get a good job.”
“I’m sorry,” I offered.
Nothing interesting happened after that. Bruce went on about his ex for a while, speaking highly of her. He told stories about days they shared in Pennsylvania. He told me all about her art and writing, and how he had obsessed over her for years, making her into a metaphor for death and loss. I listened to him ramble for quite some time, but after about half an hour I stopped caring and had to take my leave.
I lied to Bruce and told him I had work early in the morning.
When I got back to my apartment, I collapsed onto the futon and looked dramatically up at the ceiling. I got up and went to my desk. I opened the little drawer on the left.
I pulled out Nora’s picture from underneath my paystubs and saved bills. I thought about Bruce’s story and the smell of **** and alcohol. I felt pity for him– pity I didn’t want anyone to feel for me. Still, there was a clog in my throat and my eyes stung with emotion.
I sincerely hoped that Nora was having a great time in New Zealand.
I opened my window and let Nora’s picture fly into the unfamiliar city. I collapsed back on the futon.
It wasn’t comfortable
Draft 1