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LaurenEmilyWhisper

Coventry

Poems1 Followers0 Words109

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@LaurenEmily

Coventry

Joined 2015

Hi, I'm Lauren! *waves* I like to write stories, and short stories (I guess). I don't like to write poetry just because I don't think I'm that good at it, but I want to be able to write poetry and be able to think "Oh wow, I like this. I really like this." So I've came to this website to see if I can get a bit more confidence in my poetry writing. I would be thankful if you could give me feedback as well on the poems I write even if it's not a lot of poems. Maybe give me some of your views on my poems and give me some ways to improve on them. Thanks!~

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