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Im_okay

Im_okay

22/M Honestly kind of new to writing poetry…so any and all feedback is appreciated!

love smile quiet pain feel thought peace light silence god breath sit finally deep inside mine break heart eyes face free hold fall grace dark soft final word sky forgive lost speaks days place slipping hollow left voice clear loved lies borrowed live doubt care tired time mind screams stares wear push stay second sight day whispered hope despite hides breathe life nights lie feels soul room heavy hands strong blades fine slowly mask slips longer wound glance rain weight storm gray held chest hand clean laughter long will call cold afar cared prepared flaws vows told staged embrace telling rid wrong phase bump hit shape tale control view loathe shut breaking die side chosen exhausted worn numb growing blurred clouds tune circle practiced concern clothes good deeds blessings grow merit breaks grudge lift shove failure fills air offer stare truth brought scars sacred suffering grant turned cursed dawn fled