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Aug 2014 · 516
JUST ENOUGH
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
Look I ve not only wrote this to catch your attention
I ve written this to let you know when nobody's there just look for me
Then you'll see,
What a real friend is
I care for those who I'm cool with and even the ones I'm not cool with
Why,
Cause this is me
I stand for louis haynes and nobody else
No,
Words will never bring me down again
If life was a checkered flag
We all should go for that win
And I guess that'll be just enough till it ends
Aug 2014 · 283
WHY
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
WHY
WHY,
do post so many poems
I guess That's all I do as I sit here alone
I write not only to make myself happy
But to encourage those who are around me
Who are going through things
Like a death heartbreak anything that brings my people to pain
I ll make sure I ll help them gain
Why,
Have you been doubted so much
We all are doubted daily
Is up to you to prove people wrong
Show them the reason why you do what you do
Now they don't have a clue
On what to say
Or do to ruin you day
Why,
Are you so caring
Caring is in my blood
My sign
My heart
My sole
I give my heart in poems as my whole
Why,
Do I write
To enjoy my life
And teach my people who do wrongs
To turn them into rights
Aug 2014 · 963
CARESS YOUR THOUGHTS
YoungGentleman17 Aug 2014
as I look into your eyes I sense a stress and pain
Come let my words caress your thoughts for that happiness to regain
My words are soft
My charm is gentle
So when I speak my thoughts into yours
I can tell right now your thoughts want more
It's like I'm making love to your mind
Cause you ll start fantasizing about mine
This is when your fantasy forms
Your mind has made your body wet as a storm
So hows about my hands take place next
As we build our way into passionate ***
My words caress your thoughts
As my hands undress you slow
It's like a rhythm so lets go with the flow
When everything is over,
You'll feel better than before
Because when my thoughts are done caressing your thoughts you 'll always want more
Jul 2014 · 233
SOMETIMES
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
Sometimes I think About the way she treats me
The way she speaks
I even think. Of times when she doesn't. Reply maybe I'm not her type of guy
Do I care
Yes
Sometimes I feel I'm not blessed
So much mess
Is putting me through a lot of stress
But does she care
No she only thinks of her needs and desires
Sorry baby but that's not the type of heat you use to light my fire
Knowing I hate liers
But you ll lie in my face
Sometimes I wonder did I deserve to be in this place
Sometimes I wonder how life looks through other people's eyes
To see if there struggles are worse than mines
Jul 2014 · 726
DAMN REALITY
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
**** reality look at what you done
Got people on Facebook posting there selfs with guns
Then the people who doing it be thinking it's so cool
But what if the tables got turn around
What if somebody crazy saw it
What would you do
Now you got ****** out here looking for you
Because you wanna do what your friends do
NO!
be yourself homie your girl has said lots of good things about you to
And nobody don't wanna see none happen to you
I ll tell you straight up that life ain't a game
I know my bestie don't be saying that **** for nothing mane
Why follow your friends
When they should be following you
I know you da realiest ***** they can come to
I ll tell you what happens when you follow behind a bad person steps
You get set up for the ****
You get set up for time
You ll get set up over anything for trusting to many people in mind
Its a lot of ****** out here blind to see that
You a educatate brotha with money so
Be that
You a educated brotha with a good ******* your side
And I know don't wanna do none that put tears in her eyes
Ay it's your life
And we all just want the best
We seen a lot of ****
And don't want you to end like the rest
**** Reality
I hope this poem can bring a change
It's ****** up how we speak of real and people look pass it dang
Jul 2014 · 419
CANT JUDGE
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
So what if my hairline is far back
So what if I'm different from a lot of people
God made us all to be different
I wish I had this kind of mind back in middle school
Shoot it's crazy how I was da ***** people liked to talk about
I remember I use to have suicidal thoughts *** well
Cause the people I was around made me feel like I was in hell
Shoot I remember how them girls use to diss me
Especially when my friends use tried to hook me up
Them girls looked at me and laughed hard I ll admit I felt ashamed then
But now I don't care
Why cause I'm me
Imma be me till the day I die
To the people who are getting bullied
Don't cry
Just look pass these hateful people
We all have our own story to life
We shouldn't let words effect how we live
Cause at the end we'll only be giving the enemy what they want gived
Jul 2014 · 1.3k
LOST CAUSES PT. 2
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
I'm really starting lose love for this ***** undercover
Its ****** up that I gotta say that about my little brother
But every since this boy gotten older it's more drama
He care about a girl way more than his own momma
And plus this ***** rolling with ****** who be banging
I even tried to talk to this ***** about choices he making
All this ***** said its my life and my choice
This ***** be acting so tuff
He just a bluff
Can't even **** with him
I d beat him if I could
But I keep own keeping it good
LORD I'm really tryna hold a lot of anger its getting harder
Cause the things this boy been doing ain't bringing this family farther
Maybe it would be better if he started living with our father
A Bad Big brother is how this boy rates me
What's the since of shedding a tear
Towards a brother that prolly hates me
He say them ****** out in dem streets his real fam
At first I felt bad now ion really give a ****
He da type ***** that want everything handed to him
And when he can't get what he wants he'd steal
But I ll give him a bit credit if I see him tryna change
But if it doesn't work
It is what it is
I'm done talking about this *****
Jul 2014 · 230
DEAR LOVE
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
You brought some hope
You brought some pain
You even help some change
But ehat I wanna know is this
Do we as people love our soulmates as one
Or do we love that certain person for what they have
Is it the *** we want from our lovers
Affection
Comfort
I wondered this for awhile
Cause even I came across the wrongs of love
Shoot love can do 2 things
And that's send you to happiness
Or send you to depression
But even when your at depression
We must learn to forgive to regain that happiness we were missing
DEAR LOVE,
I understand you fully
People fall in you
People **** for you
People have even died for you
And its crazy shoot love goes with loves business
Like love doesn't care
Shoot love even said its enough of him in the air
DEAR LOVE,
when will the strings finally be pulled
Cause i know that cupid has his hands full
Jul 2014 · 522
FROM THEN TO NOW
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
Back then was the worst apects of my life
That's when people did me wrong and then they swared they did right
People use to hunt me down each day in night
So I locked myself within my thoughts as they began to write
I use to be intimidated by word people would say now since I changed they say they never thought they ll see the day
Just like I ll never see the day my brother go back to good ways
Never see these street ****** turn into gentlemen
And these hoes turn into women with class
Couldn't make money the right way so she in clubs shaking her ***
But enough about the world
This poem is wrote to me
So the people who faced what I faced want be alone you see
Fron then to now
Now to then
I promise to only love those who I been with through thick and thin
Jul 2014 · 678
NOW IN DAYS
YoungGentleman17 Jul 2014
now in days,
every guy wanna become a thugs
Cause when they was broke they saw people got connected to some plugs
And on top of that they start selling drugs
Now in days,
These women becoming hoes
These women becoming thots
These women getting faster
Cause there hormones getting more hot
Especially when they developed quick
Don't you know once you develop
There's a dog out searching for its cat
No I don't only write out poetry
I point out facts
Its up to anybody who reads my messages to get a understand how I feel
Now in days
There's people younger than me that robs and steals
People younger than me talking about they in da mob
Now in days,
These ****** getting popular off these made up *** gangs
Dying cause they think its a game
I'm done speaking
I've preached to them enough
Cause they could do better
And very well
Plus they never went to church
But then pray to god once they in jail
YoungGentleman17 Jun 2014
trust
faith
***
these top 3 things make any relationship last
May 2014 · 531
Words Of Encouragement
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
Words that have given hope
given faith
Words that build momentum
words that make you not wanna give up
you see words of encouragement
is the reason why we stood up after a fall
made it through the storms and ups and downs

words of encouragement
is what kept those collasping relationships together
who ever knew that simple words had so much power
now i see how i won my tack meets
how teams win sports game
it's the words of encouragement that makes them want it even more

words of encouragement is what can keep a good world together
to make not many people wanna make that better
but how about we all just encourage somebody
if you have an friend thats facing hard times
give them the words of encouragement
watch how good that make that person feel
watch how those words put an big impact on them
and  watch how God will Reward you for the helpful deed you've done

Word that are such meaning
such pleasure
can even make the devil himself feel better
words that seak out
like the words we hear in church
all fall into that one category
Words Of Encouragement
May 2014 · 402
HELLOPOETRY, I REMEMBER
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
you know it takes alot to do what we all do
putting your heart into the things we write and post
To be honest with you all i never knew i would pick up the talent to write poems and i know some of you do as well
i remember reading those older poems by Langston Hughes Tupac Shakur and others
It inspired me to write poems of my own
I remember my 9th grade year in school
thats was the moment i wrote my first poem called Gentleman, then after that was my moment i wrote then i wrote
I remember my whole class wanted me to write poems for them in my english class
from that moment i knew i had something special whn it came to poetry
but all together we all share a common trait
I bet if everyone in hellopoetry was to just meet up one day
we'll probally change the world
not only by what we say and speak
what i love the most about hellopoetry is everyone
writes poems like there stories
we dont treat this as a competition well at least i hope we dont
May 2014 · 397
VIRGINS
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
it's ok to be a ******
it shows your disease free
it shows that one your not ready
or even shows your waiting till the right one shows
but for the people who are ******'s its also a test
cause mostly for ladies
cause a guy will tell you anything to get what we he wants
we all know what that is
but even for guys we know girls have a way to get what they want to
all it takes is some suductivity and a simple dance on you
then in a snap your virginity is all away

some people hate being ******'s
cause most guys say they do it like **** stars
and last longer than batteries
to me if your a ****** dont feel bad
even though our un-****** friends gone make you feel sad
why
cause you get tired of hearing of all there ****** stories knowing you wont have anything to add
i know this cause it happens to me daily
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
NOW FOR A FAMILY THAT'S STRUGGLE
FROM HERE TO THERE
I'VE FINALLY BECAME AWARE
HOW CAN WE SLEEP
WHEN THEIRS NIGHTMARES AFTER ANOTHER
CRYING CAUSE ONE DAY THERE WILL BE A DEATH OF MY MOTHER
THE CONDITION YOUR IN HAS RUINED ME AND MIDDLE BROTHER
EVEN THE OTHER,
I KNOW WERE BREAKING YOUR HEART WHEN WE GIVE UP IN SCHOOL
I EVEN KNOW WE HAVE A CHOICE
BUT A CHOICE WONT HELP US SURVIVE
OR KEEP YOU ALIVE
I'VE LOST MY HOPE
MY PRIDE
I BET WE COULD CREATE A TSUNAMI OFF THERE TEARS WE CRIED
NOBODY HAS DID THINGS YOU DO
NOW SINCE YOUR WEAK EVEN YOUR OWN KIDS RUN OVER YOU
LOST CAUSES
THEY DON'T KNOW

NOW FOR A FAMILY THAT'S STRUGGLE
FROM HERE TO THERE
I'VE FINALLY BECAME AWARE
HOW CAN WE SLEEP
WHEN THEIRS NIGHTMARES AFTER ANOTHER
CRYING CAUSE ONE DAY THERE WILL BE A DEATH OF MY MOTHER
THE CONDITION YOUR IN HAS RUINED ME AND MIDDLE BROTHER
EVEN THE OTHER,
I KNOW WERE BREAKING YOUR HEART WHEN WE GIVE UP IN SCHOOL
I EVEN KNOW WE HAVE A CHOICE
BUT A CHOICE WONT HELP US SURVIVE
OR KEEP YOU ALIVE
I'VE LOST MY HOPE
MY PRIDE
I BET WE COULD CREATE A TSUNAMI OFF THERE TEARS WE CRIED
NOBODY HAS DID THINGS YOU DO
NOW SINCE YOUR WEAK EVEN YOUR OWN KIDS RUN OVER YOU
LOST CAUSES
THEY DON'T KNOW

NOW FOR A FAMILY THAT'S STRUGGLE
FROM HERE TO THERE
I'VE FINALLY BECAME AWARE
HOW CAN WE SLEEP
WHEN THEIRS NIGHTMARES AFTER ANOTHER
CRYING CAUSE ONE DAY THERE WILL BE A DEATH OF MY MOTHER
THE CONDITION YOUR IN HAS RUINED ME AND MIDDLE BROTHER
EVEN THE OTHER,
I KNOW WERE BREAKING YOUR HEART WHEN WE GIVE UP IN SCHOOL
I EVEN KNOW WE HAVE A CHOICE
BUT A CHOICE WONT HELP US SURVIVE
OR KEEP YOU ALIVE
I'VE LOST MY HOPE
MY PRIDE
I BET WE COULD CREATE A TSUNAMI OFF THERE TEARS WE CRIED
NOBODY HAS DID THINGS YOU DO
NOW SINCE YOUR WEAK EVEN YOUR OWN KIDS RUN OVER YOU
May 2014 · 287
I DONT UNDERSTAND
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
i dont understand how when certain people put there all in there poems nobody shows love
it's like there doing it for nothing
come on people
everyone should be like the poets who have over 100 likes 100 followers and over 10,000 views
we all do the same thing
we all have that same deep passion in poetry like others
sometimes i feel poetry is like school
you only get likes from some your followers
just like you only be cool with some in school
but here's the point let us all just take the time to read someones poem and give them a like
even to the new people we have come into the hellopoetry world
May 2014 · 964
What Is It That Ladies Want
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
Is it love and affection
Diamond and pearls
Or to be called the most beautiful girl in the world
What is it that ladies want
When we're good to them
Some say we're to weak
When we're bad
They always end up hurt
And I don't speak upon the woman beaters
We all know those guy's are jerks
But what is it that ladies want
For us to stop our cheating
For us to stop our lies
Cause there's nothing more painful hearing than a woman's cry

Admit it every guy should understand
That a ladies tear has the power to bring tears to a man
But what is it that ladies want
For us to open there doors when we go places
Maybe they want more attention from us
They may even want more conversation
More appreciation for the things they do
they might even want more ***
But I really need the anwsers before I move on to next
What is it that ladies want
I really wanna know
Because not knowing this
May allow a lot of danger to show

what is it that ladies want
for us to take care of you while you sick
hold your hands when we walk to places
hold the door for you as well
and hold you in our arms at times when you feel lifes a livig hell
you want us guys to tell you how much we love you
tell you how much we appreciate you
tell you how much you are important to us in this world
that world lady,girl,female,women,and woman it shows power
without yall we are nothing
must guys dont understand how much we need ladies in the world

so what is that ladies want
they want us to be there for them
they want us buy them gifts
to not cheat
or abuse
cause there's nothing more hurtful than a woman's broken heart
God himself created women for a reason
not for guys to dog them
or have *** with anyone he sees

so what is that ladies want
its all in the heart
i mean every guy should know
they just want a person who cares for them
i guarantee you if we love our women like an husband
protect them like an father
then this world wouldn't have so many ******
we wouldn't have so many women commiting suicide
i just want for every woman around the world to know
that somebody understands what you go through
somebody cares
and that somebody is me
I know a lot of guys out here like myself has wondered this
May 2014 · 391
SOMEBODY LOVES YOU
YoungGentleman17 May 2014
I speak upon change
Speak upon those who face pain
Speak on those who are bullied
Fighting battles with diseases
Why
Because I care for you all
I show love to any and everybody
Even those here on hellopoetry

Just because we all live in different places
Doesn't mean we can't encourage each other
Were all sisters and brothers
So why not be there for one another
To those who are feeling down
Somebody love's you
To the one's who lose a person
Just look up
Cause somebody love's you

Poetry love me I even love it back
So I speak my words
To make my fellow followers attached
Not attached to me but words I say
The things I face
Cause we all know we play a role in a world called our place
Apr 2014 · 426
My Special One
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
will she be Mexican Latino White, or Black
cool crazy **** or whack
my special one,
who can she be
and would she truly be the one for me
i know alot of us all relate to this
even you ladies who fantasize of the special kiss
Apr 2014 · 443
I Welcome You
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
I welcome you into my mind
my thoughts
to see the craziness this world has brought
people are getting killed over dollars
even sents
mane this does'nt make since
Apr 2014 · 774
Feel So Right Pt.1
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
oh i knew the day i got a peak at ya body
i was gonna have dreams of me being naughty
well today's the day my dream will come true
and it starts in this room with me and you
were both virgins,
were both ready
my goal is to make yo body bust like confetti
shhhh baby let the music play
while my hands caress your body bay

let me undress you slow
while i kiss you soft
yea go with flow
cause imma set the mood off
kissing on your neck
down to ya breast,
you no what comes next
this the definition of real ***
shhhhh baby no need to tell me things
i know you like it when that tongue play with your belly ring

next I come down to ya thighs
going down your legs,
when i get between i see your wet that's no surprise
your body's like my jungle
i'm the last survivor
feel so much heat,
i might just be ya fire fighter
so when she see me going through it i surpised her
your body's my intense,
so im giving it great sastisfaction
you know you wasn't ready for this ***** eating action
your body's my problem,
and imma solve it no math fractions
this not a movie but we both giving plenty action

you really thinking imma keep on *******
put them legs around my waist its time to start *******
see baby were no longer dreaming
as im stroking it back to back your loudly screaming
little did i know,
she turned over on top
riding on me fast,
like she don't even wanna stop
i swear i wanna make her my only girl in this city
as she rides me i start ******* on both her ******
once she stopped i'll admit i thought she was done
then when she put it in my face,
i seen the battle wasnt won
dang she got me lost inside with no map
even tried to escape but my heads trapped
im not giving up,
this not a battle meant for losing
got me ******* on ya **** as body oozing

hate to say it but im almost going down
this girl trying her best to make me drown
i finally see shes tryna be tough
so i puwhile i hit her from behind
it feels so right we wish that we could rewindt her hands behind her back
Apr 2014 · 317
Class Vs Fast
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
Class is what we should see in all girls
but fast girls are the ones that rule the world
classy girls are special,
one of a kind
and the type of girl i have in mind
a classy girl is what mothers want to see,
a classy girl is one who you can show off to the planet
even your friends
a classy girl is what we should want till the end

but its different for girls who are fast
having *** with all these all these guys in a blast
next day they decide they wanna be ladies
once there injected with some guys babies
as time goes by she'll become real lazy
and if the ones she depend on aint there,
she ll go crazy

altogether now we see
class is the favorite to need
fast is just a way of us passing our seeds
Attention all ladies which one will win
which is best of all
let the games begin
are you ready yall
lets see who goes up and see who falls
if you read gentle vs ****
this is the ladies version
Apr 2014 · 285
Sunken Dream
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
When hope is given up
when rain has fallen down
when you've lost all luck
just find another way around

when nightmares occur
when things go bad
just pray among evil
next day wont be sad

when you say its all over
lost confidense in all things
given up where lifes left ya
you've witnessed a sunken dream
Apr 2014 · 480
Doubted
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
everywhere i go im doubted
every person im around im doubted
they say your dreams will never come true
and you ll never get girls
tryna make me feel,
theres no meaning for me in this world
they called me lame
said you'd never be cool
but i feel no shame
upon those fools at school
even at home im doubted by fam
but at the end i cant fight,
who i am
Apr 2014 · 215
Love
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
they say love makes you happy
but it can also make you sad
you think things going good when there going bad
they say love lasts long
but thats only if the chemistry is strong
love is like a war cause you always gotta fight
through the day and through the night
love can also be blind
thats why you always have to use your mind
Love can be amazing
it can also drive you crazy
love is real
so real you will be willing to ****
love can be fake
don't let that overtake
cause it can cause alot of mistakes
so the only way you'll have the right type
if the person your with says you've changed there life
(by Louis Haynes)
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
when your know you at the bottom you gotta make it to the top
gotta keep on moving and dont stop
stop worrying about what people do and say
because a blessings coming your way
keep your head up high
wipe the tears out your eye
you gotta stand tall
dont let a hatter make you fall
we all have problems this we see
but dont you never change you be who you wanna be
we all go through pain
we all have insults going through our brains
and we all have those days when we feel rain
we all feel bad at times
like there's nobody's there
he'll always care
and share
so bare
cuz god is there
your blessings coming on the way
keep fighting it and pray
cuz when you wake up one morning you'll have a better day
and let me end this with this
i love you big sis
Apr 2014 · 378
Lost Cause
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
im tired of being alive i wish i could be dead
cause im always having insults going through my head
my lil brothers wanna snitch
like they a mother ******* *****
my momma getting mad cause im trying to have some fun
all these problems im facing and aint got nowhere to run
it does'nt matter if i pray
cause imma still go through the same **** everyday
so i mind as well past away
whats the since of living
when you feel your doing nothing but giving
your rights are turned to wrongs
so there aint no moving on
because we cant last for long
been living a life of pain
my love has been drained
buy the insults stuck in my brain
they say im known by being lame
you thinking that this a game
but once you dead then who is gone be blame
i dont need nobody i got me myself and I
**** all these hattas i see them and and pass them by
you can say whatever cause im something that your not
so gone and call your shots
cause you cant never take my spot
Apr 2014 · 303
Dear Momma
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
Momma im sorry for every tear I put inside your eye
Im hear to let you know imma try
Try to do better
Be more clever
And pulling your strings like a lever
Imma try to do good in school
Stop hanging around fools
Till everything is cool
I know I made you mad the other night
I was mad about my life
But now I feel alright
I know at times it seems bad
But now im glad
Because nobody has had hatters like I had
Apr 2014 · 353
My Biggest Mistake
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
well im sorry i had to leave
but i have to anwser to other needs
so  my goals will suceed
i no she got a heart
and forgive me for tearing it apart
live your life and be strong
be happy and move on
cause at the end you'll see who'll be living long
I hope you be alright
and have a good night
gone and tell your friends cause I know i aint right
but believe me im still different than others
we can be friends there for one another
please dont compare to the bad guy
cause when i was with you i never put a tear inside your eye
just keep living your life
cause im very sure you'll make a person's wife
so enjoy live your life have your fun
and please don't think about this mean thing that I've done
this is already to hard for me to take

therefore this could be my biggest mistake
Apr 2014 · 323
I Hope (for keiyanna)
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
well before i go to bed i gotta say this
you getting out the hostpital my only wish
i been depressed in da morning crying at night
just because i want you to be alright
your my only girl
in this crazy world
we'll go through thick and thin
be forgiving by our sins
but im hoping u wake up from the coma your in
baby girl i cant take it
cant break it
or shake it
if there''s no you there's no me
with you is the only place i wanna be
i'll alway's be real faithful to
just to see your pretty smile boo
plus my best friend mad at me too
but i gotta stay strong
and pray the lord dont take her home
because our love is everlasting long
im her king
she's my queen
and put that together it makes the best couple you've seen

By Louis Haynes
Dedicated To The Love Of My Life
who's currently in the hospital over a fatal insedent
Apr 2014 · 351
Last Breath
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
IT'S ONLY ME LEFT INSIDE THIS JUNT
I TAKE MY LAST BREATH AS I HIT DA BLUNT
FEELING SO HIGH AS I REACH THE CLOUDS
THEY SAY THIS DA DEFINITION OF LOUD
SO HERE I AM ALL ALONE
WITH REGIE LOUD AND KUSH IN MY HOME
EACH 1 I HIT THE BETTER I FEEL
SMOKED SO MANY IM DOING MY OWN DRILLS
I REACHED MY MARK
I THEN LAUGH AT LAST
PEOPLE AROUND TELLING ME TO PASS
I LOOK AND LAUGH AT THEY ***
SO OFF I GO BACK TO THE ROOM
WHERE THE SCENT OF THE FLOWERS SEND ME TO BLOOM
AND THEN PUFFS I WILL TAKE WILL SEND ME TO ZOOM
YOU KNOW YOUR HIGH WHEN YOUR EYES ARE LOW
AND EVERYTHING SEEMS TO MOVE SLOW
YOU KNOW YOUR HIGH WHEN YOU EAT MEAL AFTER MEAL
THEN FALL ASLEEP AFTA YOU HIT DA PEEL
WAKE UP NEXT MORNING FULL OF HEALTH
AS YOU REPEAT THE STEPS TILL YOUR LAST BREATH
Apr 2014 · 356
Wounded for christian
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
Out of all the things you faced
Even things you can't replace
No matter how wounded you were let it all erase
I know ya struggled at times
I even know you cried some tears
But look you still here
For all the people who mistreated you
Abused or even beated you
Being wounded never defeated you
But when tbey look at you now
All your doing through range
My sis Christian CaliYork said she came for a change
Gotta admit I'm real proud
Some people don't understand
But your not only my sis you also a good friend
My sis said she gone make
Regardless of the past
Nobody will never take it
Cause she has toom off like a blast
Remember this at the beginning
I dedicated this to you cause when they said you losing
At the end now you winning
Apr 2014 · 196
Always Myself
YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
Rather you love me or hate me
I'm bound to be strong
I lived by the rules 17 years long
Sometimes I watch the life of others and compare it to mines
I guarantee you at those times
I'm outshined
I'm very smart tho I'm not passing
Reason why is to many struggles been clashing
Things get more worse than better
Its so crazy,
Mane I know a lot people wouldn't care
That's the reason why I ll tell ya life ain't fair
I know people from way back who don't speak to me now
Looking over it all
All I can say is wow
But I'm happy to see most o of them doing great
Tho there's others like me that's still in the chase
Mar 2014 · 1.5k
PARANOID
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I'm paranoid to wonder when life will end
Will I die alone
Or with family and friends
Is there a chance I ll see the day I ll become a man
Or be tooking away by the lords hands

I'm paranoid to see the Ghost
To become possessed is what I fear the most
I wonder if I ll find my mate
I'm paranoid to see my true fate

I'm paranoid to see true history
Though I wonder why our nations are in misery
At lease were in peace
Instead of war
But when peace has been released
That's when Im paranoid even more

My brother be in And out them streets
I'm paranoid one dat he ll be badly beat
I live a life that's full of drama
Ask karma
Or dharma
Why I'm so paranoid of the disease in my momma

These are the things that put me to tears
And are my biggest fears
Mar 2014 · 250
To All Poem Writers
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
Hello to all poeotry Writers
I welcome you all to this imaginary place
Come join us all and let your thoughts erase
my name is louis tennessee is my state memphis is my town
I can never go a day without writing something down
But I made a lot of poems and imma have fame
See growing up as me you never heard you name

If u show me live I ll show it back
Then maybe my page wilk be packed
To all poem writers your all my family
Not only because we all do the same thing
Pardon me
I just wanna see how respect this poem me
Mar 2014 · 350
The Real You
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
You played me
After all I done
After the money I sent away for you
Did something that your own family wouldn't help you do
And what I get in return
You cuddling with another man
After him hiself said yall were friends
You make out with this guy as well
Mane you both can burn in hell

How could you say you want a guy who nice
And dat guy ain't even right
He got a felony but you still let him in right
I'm hurt inside but you don't know
At least god let the real in you show
Tell me what can he do for you
Without a job
Car and even house
And don't bother tell me what this really about

This situation has put me in rage
She's only 15 and he's 19 in age
Dude your a ******
And it makes her a ****
I don't even wanna be your friend nomore
Telling me you might fall asleep
When I know you lyin
Your gonna sleep with this man
Thinking I'm stupid
If he's what you really want,
He can be your cupid
Mar 2014 · 537
This Woman's Work
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
It takes a real man to treat a lady right
You give her love
Affection Attension
Pleasure you do these things
And your bound to be together
Forever

You know she's real when she breaks her back to be in your life
Thats the type of girl I ll be dying to make my wife
A lot of people don't know ehat the power of love can do
But I see a lot of power I as look into you

This woman's work,
Can make a man fall to his knees
Begging her that's she's the answer to his needs
you know she's special when you start to cope
Living a day of love and infinite hope

This woman's work,
Can bring the nation close
Her work can  put a end to crime
This woman was made to shine
And I'm hoping at the end,
This kind of woman will be mine's
This is my poem version of the real song
Mar 2014 · 372
Light Down Low Pt.1
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
Tonights a night I'm hoping you can handle
As we lay naked in covers,
Surrounded around dim candles
Let us come closer until we become hot
Then I ll caress your body as I find your spots
We have music playing in the back,
Whipped cream in my hands
The things I'm finna do is your minds demand

The lights are dim
The lights are low
I hear you calling my name
As I kiss your body slow
I feel a sense of your treasure
Your hands are bringing extra pressure,
As you reveal your true pleasure

How about a 68 to make things fair
Or you can 69 me as I sit in this chair
I hope you'll remain gentle
No need to be tough
As time goes by things become rough
Her hands are behind her back while she's kneeled on the ground
Then I stroke her body till I flip her around

As were both are laid I stroke inside
As I **** her breast
Just wanna show you my love at its best
And put my skills to test
You've stolen my virginity,
This must be a crime
Because we both are in this bedroom serving our time
But listen the story only gets better
Stayed tuned cause it just gets wetter
Mar 2014 · 382
TRUE SAD STORY
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I hate to see you face so much
You gotta deal with people
Plus today you were beat an d *****
I know that's to hard to forget and escape

If I was in your city with you
I ll always keep you safe
Cause I guess my feelings have been tooken over by your grace

I hate the fact no justice has been done
So right now your in a battle that's not even won
How could your brother allow them to do what they did
I guess he didn't know what to expect
So tell me how should give him respect

Its bad enough you deal with diabetes
You deal with stress
And this has added on to the rest
So I know your feeling a mess
But hope one day you ll be at your best
So may God bless
Mar 2014 · 537
FIRST LOVE
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
That moment when you first see there face
Knowing if they were in your life it'll always be great
So is true your first love
Keeps you in the cool mind of state

I remember my first crush
I was only in the 5th grade
Everytime I saw her face
I really thought I had it made

You know that feeling when they walk pass
And you catch them by your eye
Sometimes you feel like your in heaven
Sometimes you feel relief
And when there in a emergency you become the 911

That moment when they finally come to your
Heart
Making promises to never break apart
Its like you started a new life part
Attiension all how did yall feel when yall seen yall first love
Mar 2014 · 352
LOST HOPE
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
What's the since of living
When you never feel right
I have no hope
Falling dreams
I know you wonder why a teen says these kinda things

I always been a child with no confidence in this world
I couldn't even get a city lady
So I started talking to out of town girls
Everysince that moment my cousin and brothers
Have judge me talked about me bad
I might smile in person but in the inside
I'm always sad

Girls in my city used me
Made me feel lonely and like a dummy
So I've developed some issues
Thinking every girl will use me for money

But now I understand that ever lady is not the same
I need a real woman to teach me these girls games
So I'm calling out to all women I really need help

My heart has been broken way to many times
I suffered pain everyday
Wish that special lady came
That way my pain will wash away

Mane I remember there was a time I had a crush
I really liked her more than any other
Everytime she came around I'd blush
But it ruined me when I realized she liked my brother

So what's the since of being good when it leads to no joy
I feel I've been more played than a child's toy
I'd rather die than cry
And no one cares to wonder why

I've lost all hope
With none to find
No way I ll cope
Cause at the end I ll be out my mind
Mar 2014 · 276
Dear Ariee
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
No words can explain how I feel if you
I try to do all I can to make you smile
And every since the day I accused you of using me
We been fighting for a while

I know were both far apart
I know your life is harder than mine
You ve always had a broken heart
That hasn't fixed overtime

Why I  made you my bestest friend
Cause you were always there
When I was lost in this world
It seem like your the only one who cared

You've given me words of encouragement when I was sad and down
that why I've dreamed of you being my queen
But trust me your more royal than a crown
I'd rather see you in a white gown

Everything used to be good
But good has its wrongs
Everysince last night
When u said u wanted to die my heart collasped
So I'm no longer strong

Everyday I feel guilty
And sorry no longer works
I'd rather die right beside you
Cause how much our love is worth

I feel you probably hate me
And its killing me inside
And since our old times will never come back
I cry with my eyes open wide

Dear Ariee
I know in wrong for what I said
Everyday I question myself what have I done
And now its all got me in stress
Without you in my life I ll just be a mess

Dear ariee
Being close again is what I hope
Cause arguments are gonna leave us broke
No its not a joke
Its hard to think at night when your feelings try to cope
Mar 2014 · 631
DEDICATION
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I'm dedicated to the writing I do
If I can achieve my goals you can to
All It takes is time and dedication
faith and hope
Disregaurd the feelings cause they shall cope
when you give your dedication to something
You won't achieve it in a day
You gotta put in more time
Put in more focus
You even have to put in tears
Cause there's time we will fail
I mean well fail a lot
But if on trying you ll feel like a star player when there hot
And when that happens,
Your now in a zone
now since you, ve reached your limit
Everyone will see your on
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
You know that feeling when music plays in the background
Whipped cream and strawberries on the bed
most people rush through I'd rather take it slow instead
You know that feeling when there's rose petals,
That lead inside the room
We both stand here naked as we wait upon the moon
You know that feeling when it starts
If my tounge starts on your body
Is when you give me most your heart
You know that feeling when you say he's a teaser
well tonight my lady I ll be your pleasure pleaser
You know that feeling when it feels more better
My tounge falls between your legs
The secret that gets you wetter
As time goes by,
I hear the sound of your voice
Your love feels like church,
And I'm dying to rejoice
You know that feeling when I'm deeper
Your nails stratching my back
Your moans grow louder
and your becoming more louder
You know that feeling when your legs come to my shoulder
As we ease on to the wall
Eating until I feel a river fall
You know that feeling when  evertime I get inside
Your something like a goddess when you climb on top and ride
I know you know your riding is the best
The feeling of you riding with my face between your breast
You know that feeling when you lose control
We've went in so many places its like were trying to travel
You know that feeling when your trying to hold stable
I enter from behind as she grips on to the table
No my baby never lacks
The deeper I go in
The harder she throws it back
You know that feeling when you lasting for hours
Our bodies are both wet as she's eaten in the shower
I promise I ll always give this kind of endurance
Your body is in good hands
Your my allstate insurance
Our last position is the 69
But tonight will be 68
Because I wanna make you mines
Mar 2014 · 782
DEAR ROSE (ROSELINNA)
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
First I would like to say I'm thankful your the caretaker of my mother
Im so happy your nothing like the others
This poem is not only from me its also from my dearest brothers
We're proud to see that your the person you are
A lady with infinite pride
And a personality that's bright as stars
We love how you come around and laugh with us and play
But can you promise louis and momma you won't scare them like you on one day
Dear rose
We see you as a angel that was sent from Christ
it likes God sent you hear to make our mother live more right
Mainly because we treat her so wrong
Rose were trying as hard as can
But for a mother that's now disabled,
Its hard to raise her boys to men
Were saying this now because we know you understand
Dear rose we hope your feeling better
And we all hope you read this poem or family letter
Well thank you rose its been great
While your at home your second family is here
But in the meantime we'll
Make sure mother faces no more pain and tears
Mar 2014 · 767
Misunderstood
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
My whole life I was the most talked about person there was
I was talked about by people by co workers by friends
I thought one day it would all end
I laugh and smile not to show how I truly feel around people
It not like anybody will care anyways
I was always judged throughout my life In school
And yet they still judge me to look cool
My whole life people told me I'm nothing I'd always be considered lame
So now I've gaven up on t popularity and fame
I feel there's no reason for me to be in this world
I laugh and feel sad as I wath all my cousin and brothers get girls
Nobody understands me not my brothers and even my mother
I guess that's why it shows from others
Nobody understands  my pain my kife my struggles and more
I'm an angel that's fallen that can no longer sore
Nobody understands me only because I'm different
Different by how I act and how I look
I was the kid who had nicknames still today its the same
I still have pain inside
But out of every hurt I felt it never ruined my pride
So that part is good
My Name is Louis Haynes
And I'm misunderstood
Mar 2014 · 344
HOW COULD YOU
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
How could you
Tell me you love me when it all is a lie
Leave  me in these tears that fall out my eye
I thought you'd always be my lady
How could you go behind my back and have a baby

Can't you see  that a guy cries as well
How could you come in my life and make it a living hell
These days have come these days have past
I wished death upon me cause I feel I shouldn't last

I understand your a lady out of town
My feelings for you are gonna go out of bounds
Because I feel your using me for a lot of things
But I hope inst true because your my one and only thing

I pray when the future comes I ll make you my wife
How could you not no your the lady I won't in my life
So come please I promise to love you all might
And for every wrong you faced I promise I ll make them all right
Mar 2014 · 513
Devil Is A Lie
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
The devil is a lie
I was raised as a Christian,
Made to sore in tbe sky
The devil is only trying to make me become wrong
Or even an society threat
I never wished upon evil
Guess we never met
The devil is a lie
If he puts himself In other people
The lord I serve says to never be illegal
But the devil thinks he sneeky
The devil thinks he's slick
One day I felll for a lady
And she wasn't the wrong chick
The devil took over her life
So when she passed away,
She became the devils wife
The devil is a lie
If he thinks I ll give him my life or my sole
I belong to Jesus
Yes devil he has my whole
Feb 2014 · 365
FROM THEN TO NOW
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
We use to fight for rights
Now we fighting for life
One man had a dream
But we living his nightmare is how it seems
Killing and others have tooken there course
It seems the streets is our only source
My people are really starting to lack
Its bad enough we got strikes for being black
Back then we made history in this world
Now we putting babies in young girls
Twerking and others could be fun
But as I watch the world new things should be done
Now I see why wr all were slaves
Cause being free has gotten lots of us in graves
I really wish this world heard my voice
But we all have our own choice
Feb 2014 · 5.6k
Gentleman Vs Thugg
YoungGentleman17 Feb 2014
A gentleman is a guy who'll treat a girl right
But s thugg only wants to hit it for one night
A gentleman is romantic and sweet
A thugg is only nice to get in the sheets
The gentleman will open his lady door
And address her by her name of dear
A thugg will leave her and even more
But they say they bring a lady to cheer
A gentleman is faithful
Thugs are ungreatful
Calling girls ******* and hoes can be hateful
Thuggs are winning
Gentlemen are losing
The **** keeps lots of girls choosing
A gentleman dresses professional and neat
While a thugg sags and eorks the streets
You choose which one is best
Which one will win and put other to rest
A gentleman classifies me
But which one would yoh rather be
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