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Jan 2011
Uncommon persistence
I prefer rather than figure
Good critical motivation
I rely only on following attitudes
attitudes, attitudes,
Processed comments recognize the way we criticized,
-analyzed the 10 easy steps
Constructive problem areas, shortcomings
only always tear somebody, absolutely negative
-well educate me - read twice - get my feet wet in passages
- title pieces - typical frost
Misunderstood the apparent merits of the Road Less Traveled
- stay calm - read aloud - give an internalized, patterned voice
Graphic picture representations - especially broken up
- a real reflection of the dome - no, not wrong, your own words
- who is the speaker, not narrator - useless and dismissed poets
repetition, repetition,
Intentionally refuse to resolve symbols
-now to the lights
Joseph M. 01/20/11
Joseph Martinez
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Joseph Martinez  Detroit
(Detroit)   
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