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"patroklus" poems
Which one was Achilles's heel. Hector's hand spun the wheel. The Face that launched a Thousand ships. Why not a bottle of the bubbly to the prow ? Olympian intrigue. Odyssey seafaring fatigue. Tempest in a teapot Time to **** Nothing good on T.V.?
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Jul 12, 2013
Jul 12, 2013 at 8:03 AM UTC
Agamemnon or Patroklus
Achilles does not sleep. Instead, he seeks the lover’s embrace and curved lips alongside which he went to war; Those same that he did not find, Once the dark mist had come swirling down over his eyes And his soul went winging down to the House of Death, with a soldier’s sigh of relief. He had whispered in Charon’s ear, “Take me to him.” Charon had rowed on, but held his silence. By way of greeting, a thousand faces turned away, And no trace of his beloved’s sweet smile as he disembarked, no warm hand to take his own. “Patroklus,” he cries, And goes unheard. Thus; Achilles does not sleep. He is Achilles; he does not wait. He is Achilles; instead, he aches. He is Achilles; instead, he searches. Over the horizon, he chases Patroklus’ laugh and the turn of his wrist. He lingers in all the shadowed corners of eternity, Leafs through the pages of unforgiving, unyielding posterity, Whispers “Patroklus, best of the Myrmidons” and sends his name through the winds. The headstrong runner does not drag his feet as he scours the world, As he chases ghosts across the face of the earth. Restless, he is never still, Knows that each step must carry him closer, Knows that each ragged cry may be the one That is finally answered, Each rendition the wound to be finally salved. He haunts, and is haunted. ‘I did not feel it,’ he thinks. 'It should have been as though Hektor’s pierced my side, in turn. Did they not say we were one?’ As if what he felt, when they told him, had not been enough. (Scamander would disagree). One day, smiling among the cypress, he will cease. One day, the thousand faces turned away will melt to the one alone that within itself holds his heart. One day, his greeting will be that sweet smile that he found only in the dawn. One day, a warm hand will take his own, and the word with which his beloved left him will be the same as that which retrieves him: 'Ἀχιλλέυς.’ Until the day when his heart pours out golden, Achilles will not sleep.
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Apr 28, 2016
Apr 28, 2016 at 10:17 AM UTC
“but achilles kept on grieving...the memory burning on...dawn on dawn flaming over the sea and shore would find him pacing.” - the iliad, book xxiv
Achilles does not sleep. Instead, he seeks the lover’s embrace and curved lips alongside which he went to war; Those same that he did not find, Once the dark mist had come swirling down over his eyes And his soul went winging down to the House of Death, with a soldier’s sigh of relief. He had whispered in Charon’s ear, “Take me to him.” Charon had rowed on, but held his silence. By way of greeting, a thousand faces turned away, And no trace of his beloved’s sweet smile as he disembarked, no warm hand to take his own. “Patroklus,” he cries, And goes unheard. Thus; Achilles does not sleep. He is Achilles; he does not wait. He is Achilles; instead, he aches. He is Achilles; instead, he searches. Over the horizon, he chases Patroklus’ laugh and the turn of his wrist. He lingers in all the shadowed corners of eternity, Leafs through the pages of unforgiving, unyielding posterity, Whispers “Patroklus, best of the Myrmidons” and sends his name through the winds. The headstrong runner does not drag his feet as he scours the world, As he chases ghosts across the face of the earth. Restless, he is never still, Knows that each step must carry him closer, Knows that each ragged cry may be the one That is finally answered, Each rendition the wound to be finally salved. He haunts, and is haunted. ‘I did not feel it,’ he thinks. 'It should have been as though Hektor’s pierced my side, in turn. Did they not say we were one?’ As if what he felt, when they told him, had not been enough. (Scamander would disagree). One day, smiling among the cypress, he will cease. One day, the thousand faces turned away will melt to the one alone that within itself holds his heart. One day, his greeting will be that sweet smile that he found only in the dawn. One day, a warm hand will take his own, and the word with which his beloved left him will be the same as that which retrieves him: 'Ἀχιλλέυς.’ Until the day when his heart pours out golden, Achilles will not sleep.
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