Poemasabi

Poemasabi Feb 2017

Rage

Rage
is
a form
of blindness
of discarding one
of needs, wants and self interest
replaced with hatred and selective deafness of facts

#fibonacci #fibpoem

Poemasabi Feb 2017

The Man Says Sleet

The man says morning ice, sleet and rain
Then the man says maybe no ice
Next he says sleet, not so much
Day will be warmer too
and no rain either
I think I'll go
to the beach
instead
bye

You know me well enough by now, to know that if I read about a new poem form (new to me anyway) that I'll play with it at least once.

#nonet

Poemasabi Feb 2017

Fish

Fish
ate fish
eaten by fish

#haynaku

Poemasabi Feb 2017

Idiocy Diligently Maintained

Thoughtful idiocy diligently maintained
creates maleficent self-deception untold
leading intelligent communities astray
Whereas visionary sincerity assists
leading diligently intelligent people
towards revolution unstoppable, peaceful

Playing with a new poem form

Poemasabi Feb 2017

Tooth Chest (Kelly Lune)

Tiny plastic chest
holds a pearl
for under pillow

To play with the Lune form I've taken the same poem and done it both Lune forms, Kelly (5-3-5 syllables) and Collom (3-5-3 words).

Poemasabi Feb 2017

Tooth Chest (Collom Lune)

Little plastic chest
holds a tiny misshapen pearl
placed under pillow

To play with the Lune form I've taken the same poem and done it both Lune forms, Kelly (5-3-5 syllables) and Collom (3-5-3 words).

Poemasabi Feb 2017

Winter Bird (Luc Bat)

Summer's lake now solid and cold
June's leaves now old and dry
As gray streams pass through frigid sky
Birds should fly for tropics
here in wind hold tight to their sticks
but birdy's trick can pay
with sun on wing that first spring day

My first attempt at a Luc Bat poem. Luc Bat is a Vietnamese form. For information on the form, follow this link. http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/luc-bat-poems-poetic-form

#lucbat