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beautiful morning     amber filtered . . .                       with the forest fire smog it's fine   don't worry     it's been carried a great distance                  to reach our city a slight itchiness to the eyes a slight betrayal      with breathing being                                     a little harsh for some beautiful morning         teased branches                        their tinsel shadows                and a warm rustle
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Aug 2, 2025
Aug 2, 2025 at 11:42 AM UTC
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beautiful morning     amber filtered . . .                       with the forest fire smog it's fine   don't worry     it's been carried a great distance                  to reach our city a slight itchiness to the eyes a slight betrayal      with breathing being                                     a little harsh for some beautiful morning         teased branches                        their tinsel shadows                and a warm rustle
01/08/25version above NOTES FROM 22/07/25 : beautiful morning shadows/of teased branches/tinsel shadows/and warm rustle Haiku version : an amber morning teased branches tinsel shadows a warm rustling
#forest#fire#smoke#smog#amber#beauty#city#summer#shadows
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Aug 2, 2025
Aug 2, 2025 at 11:42 AM UTC
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