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#smog
beautiful morning     amber filtered . . .                       with the forest fire smog it's fine   don't worry     it's been carried a great distance                  to reach our city a slight itchiness to the eyes a slight betrayal      with breathing being                                     a little harsh for some beautiful morning         teased branches                        their tinsel shadows                and a warm rustle
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Aug 2, 2025
Aug 2, 2025 at 11:42 AM UTC
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Mist-minded, clouded thoughts Can't seem to focus, or keep rapport Importance is relevant, irrelevant I dwell In this cartography, well-drawn Hell Zipped up lips, verbiage tripped The spoken, delivery, edge unclipped Harsh and cold, worn limestone Regardless of polish, I'm overgrown What feels real is this heart of steel All else surrounds, of fabric, of gown Dressed up nice to masquerade False-tipped smiles, dead parade. The forge burns true, just underneath My love, my Sun, I shall bequeath Hardened and cold, aftermath of the craft Add a little heat and reveal my heart.
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May 12, 2021
May 12, 2021 at 9:05 PM UTC
Smog
A girl cries out in the night A mother rushes to hold her in her arms. The older sister in the same room stays silent. She watches her mother coo the little baby to sleep She waits for her to leave before getting up once more. She looks out the window, the sky covered in smog. "I want to see the stars." She opened the window and climbed to the ledge. She was six years old. Sitting there and breathing, the little girl watched the smog for signs of the little white sparkles stuck in the sky. The baby started crying again. Her mother came to comfort her. She didn't notice the girl's empty bed Only the window. She shut it, locked it tight. The little girl wasn't scared. She brought herself standing and looked down below. "Bye Mom!" The window flew open too late.
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Feb 20, 2020
Feb 20, 2020 at 5:45 AM UTC
See the Stars
A cloud of smoke and fog so toxic They had to give it a name. Out here, it coils around signs And slinks up the height of buses: Keen and watchful, like a python, Squeezing the life from My lungs. Heavy with ash And tar from the cigarettes. The fumes snake upwards, Swirling in fog, smog, Ashen clouds. There's a sight For sore minds.
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Nov 27, 2018
Nov 27, 2018 at 5:08 AM UTC
Smog
all that surface area all us beings make creates too concentrated an environment a sick air it's not a sacrifice it's healthy release
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Jun 28, 2018
Jun 28, 2018 at 10:27 PM UTC
Smog : Janes suicide note [don't worry ; she never went through with it]
I've got a bad case of brain fog Maybe you should call it brain smog Because I've got all sorts of bad thoughts Diluting my air And spilling into the words that I speak to you Oh god, please hear me You should fear me Because soon you'll be coughing up your lungs Don't come near me I'll be climbing up your atmosphere Burning up the hearts of your daughter's Corrupting the thoughts of the Poofy goofy white clouds of childhood I've got brain smog Don't let me hurt you Quick clean up your mistake Before mother sees the blood upon the bathroom floor Hurry she's knocking on the door She already knows you're a ***** ***** I've got brain smog Look at you, you pathetic dog You don't know how to unclog The nasty case of brain smog
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Mar 9, 2018
Mar 9, 2018 at 11:00 PM UTC
Pollution
The beast that needs to be tamed lives within yourself. All the other despair is smog being blown away by the invisible mouths of those who, with cries and silence, are trying to breath and move around under water, trying to think which was that one turn that brought them here and started the person that became. All these right-and-wrongs that are said and also those who remain silent, all these intentions toward a saved life, and all these doors that are being opened and closed, are so much like the efforts of a writer creating a character for a book that will be finished on a deathbed and surrounded by teary-eyed beasts in human skin.
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Nov 15, 2017
Nov 15, 2017 at 8:41 AM UTC
Beasts in human skin
We sailed the sea In a boat made of ivory, And we sailed away Till the thirty-third day. On the thirty-third day, We docked in a land; Crafted by the hands Of a million slaves. It was sparkling out In the night darkened sky, As the people burned All their candles away. Into the sky, the smoke rose So high to the stars, And it warmed up the air, And the jumper I’d worn, Brushed the floor As I carried it Along through the streets. ‘No more ice, Only water, Only smoke, Only steam, No more frost to freeze The fast running streams. No more cold to tear Your lungs at the seams’ This was seen as the reason To why they were right, Not wrong, to continue To set more fires alight. ’It is good, it is good’ they sang. They danced round the fire; The warm got warmer as the fire drew higher. 'No more cold, no more cold. It has melted away. We’ll only have summer For the rest of our days. Under the orange tinted sky, We’ll stay happily beneath it. No more white, snow-filled clouds That sprinkle around us Like a shroud. The smoke has melted the cold all away; We’ll only have summer for the rest of our days.’ This is what the townsfolk did say. On the forty-third day A marching band played For remembrance Of the famous Chirp-Chirp birds. It is thought that they’d flown Far, far away. As nobody had seen them For quite a few days. Because of the smog and because of the heat, They could no longer stay And decided to fleet From the suffocating air And the ash filled, choking skies. They left while they could, Before all the flock died. Now pennies are collected in effort to remind Of the other kinds of birds that may fly away too; If they all did that, there would be no bird stew. So, the people pay their pennies to save the last few. We had to sail away from this hot, smoky land, On the forty-fifth day, we walked back to the sand, Where our ivory boat was tied up at the dock, And we laughed at the sight of the Chirp-chirp bird flock! They were perched on the boat awaiting our return To escape this land hidden safely in the stern. Without having to fly they could relax, And just lie back; They wouldn’t even need to give their purple wings a flap. We remarked how they were clever, And we let them stay on board. Then we planned the fate Of the Chirp-Chirp bird hoard. When we return, they will live in little, cramped busy zoos, Or we may even make them into Chirp-Chirp bird stew.
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Sep 29, 2017
Sep 29, 2017 at 7:28 AM UTC
Chirp-Chirp Bird Stew.
We sailed the sea In a boat made of ivory, And we sailed away Till the thirty-third day. On the thirty-third day, We docked in a land; Crafted by the hands Of a million slaves. It was sparkling out In the night darkened sky, As the people burned All their candles away. Into the sky, the smoke rose So high to the stars, And it warmed up the air, And the jumper I’d worn, Brushed the floor As I carried it Along through the streets. ‘No more ice, Only water, Only smoke, Only steam, No more frost to freeze The fast running streams. No more cold to tear Your lungs at the seams’ This was seen as the reason To why they were right, Not wrong, to continue To set more fires alight. ’It is good, it is good’ they sang. They danced round the fire; The warm got warmer as the fire drew higher. 'No more cold, no more cold. It has melted away. We’ll only have summer For the rest of our days. Under the orange tinted sky, We’ll stay happily beneath it. No more white, snow-filled clouds That sprinkle around us Like a shroud. The smoke has melted the cold all away; We’ll only have summer for the rest of our days.’ This is what the townsfolk did say. On the forty-third day A marching band played For remembrance Of the famous Chirp-Chirp birds. It is thought that they’d flown Far, far away. As nobody had seen them For quite a few days. Because of the smog and because of the heat, They could no longer stay And decided to fleet From the suffocating air And the ash filled, choking skies. They left while they could, Before all the flock died. Now pennies are collected in effort to remind Of the other kinds of birds that may fly away too; If they all did that, there would be no bird stew. So, the people pay their pennies to save the last few. We had to sail away from this hot, smoky land, On the forty-fifth day, we walked back to the sand, Where our ivory boat was tied up at the dock, And we laughed at the sight of the Chirp-chirp bird flock! They were perched on the boat awaiting our return To escape this land hidden safely in the stern. Without having to fly they could relax, And just lie back; They wouldn’t even need to give their purple wings a flap. We remarked how they were clever, And we let them stay on board. Then we planned the fate Of the Chirp-Chirp bird hoard. When we return, they will live in little, cramped busy zoos, Or we may even make them into Chirp-Chirp bird stew.
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candle headed kids, melting under pressure. contorting and dying under the weight of something so bright and important: a flame. the burn of a good future just an arms reach away. the heat of not letting anyone down. the scorching pain of reaching through the flame, the one thing destroying them, just to succeed. just to not let anyone down. just to live. anxious. forever anxious. smog headed kids. they cannot breathe. their thoughts, contorting around their lungs, killing them. so dark, so dark in their minds. the need for pain, the feeling of undeserving. no one understands a smog headed kid. forever choking over their own mind.
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Sep 18, 2017
Sep 18, 2017 at 7:32 PM UTC
2 poems.
There's a puddle on my cheek And its there because you won't speak When you're silent, my mind runs more than it should And it never makes up anything good I try to see from your eyes But that only makes me want to cry I've lost my own eyes in a smog I'm not sure of where to walk I haven't heard anything from either ear So far, no sign of direction is clear
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Jan 11, 2017
Jan 11, 2017 at 1:04 PM UTC
Smog
loneliness has defined this old soul. Bittersweet melody has tuned my way of living. I don't know how much my heart could stand the weight and wait for that simple moment, that single spark to feel alive and stop breathing the ashen smog of reality.
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Mar 20, 2016
Mar 20, 2016 at 10:48 AM UTC
ashen smog
I thought the cold air would help But there's only ******* smoke Free **** I'm living the dream of a million burnt out lungs with capillaries astray - Sadness is a comfort Happiness burns against my eyelids It sears against the grey - Age doesn't matter as long as you pay Head high to keep the nausea at bay; Visions blur, thought the alcohol in my backpack somehow took effect it was just the ******* smoke.
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Dec 23, 2015
Dec 23, 2015 at 3:19 AM UTC
Beijing, China
It is cold tonight, But that's alright. Leftover winter air Rushes through my open window , And coils of my heat Languidly rise to the stars Obscured by city air, true; But still sitting undisturbed Far, far away from this night. This night that takes my warmth.
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Jun 14, 2015
Jun 14, 2015 at 3:03 AM UTC
Chips of gleaming ice
The city breathes in, A rattling wind of dusty smog, Desperate in earnest, Filling up the tubes and chambers Like bellows on a hot furnace. The air is pervasive, insidious; It sticks to your skin and burns Like holy water flicked from Jordan, Downstream from the chemical plants And pipes that lead health a merry chase. It chews up the lungs with carcinogen teeth And spits out the bits leaving holes of black That spread through the organs like fire, Immolating thoughts of hope and dreams, And constantly whispering give up the race. The city breathes out, A rattling wind of corrupted fog, And those that escaped the ill in the dark Race like the wind away from its lungs, Before the corruption spreads to their heart.
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May 25, 2015
May 25, 2015 at 6:11 AM UTC
The City
3:8:15 - Kosher pinot noir toasts the snowflakes that the eider brings, just as the Ash bows ache; naked and starving. Hurdling through old bedroom windows, giving those reasons why pennies are wished first into window wells. Smoggy gawkers, locked into an image shaped by organic lines and gestures. The two smoker- cure their hours reconnoitering in skyrise stairwells, discussing recipes for fixing wounded hearts without the peaceful frequencies she speaks into two styrofoam cups with strings pierced through their innards. Much like the story of how two people meet within the timespan of the living. Even the Moon Men eat space cakes to loosen their chests, from the apathetic laws that began to govern their personalized truths. Not a mug with a name on it bought after an almost very cool free-art reenactment of Pirates of the Caribbean. Love is not a sentence I can choose not to awaken. It's the difference between having a one night stand rather than keeping a toothbrush at each other's places. Even on a Saturday night, we could fasten ourselves to one another. Even if it's only you and I, who are you to say it's not a party.
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Mar 8, 2015
Mar 8, 2015 at 9:47 AM UTC
BREAKING NEWS: Mandy Patinkin May Be Black
I took a walk today and listened to the birds choking on the smog, broke my mother's back with every step and outran a stray dog. I picked you a bouquet of dandelions from the field because flowers can't grow when the sun's always concealed. I put them in a vase and filled it with water from the tap they died within an hour, now I know for sure you won't come back. I always swore I'd never own a broken home but it's hard not to when the only one's who stay are the garden gnomes — but someone's been smashing them in the middle of the night, or maybe they're blowing out their brains to escape my company and the blight. There's no magic left in this city, so chronically gray storms are always passing though and the rainbows are too scared to stay... I wanted to run away with you from the hood and past the burbs to somewhere where the air is clean and filled with singing birds. But instead I'm stuck here on this couch, microwaving Ramen while I search for words.
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 2:00 PM UTC
Rhyme for Detroit
Love is in the air Darkening as i smoke Like the smog i breathe When i choke... Kicked in the head Roses in a vase Left out for dead When i see her face...
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 8:44 AM UTC
Broken Heart and Broken Lungs