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The sadness has dissipated. Not even fear remains. It has been replaced With absolutely nothing. People ask how I'm doing And I say, "Better today." But I'm not. Raw emotion was Replaced. With emptiness. I'd rather feel everything Than nothing at all.
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Oct 27, 2021
Oct 27, 2021 at 3:28 PM UTC
Empty
The sadness has dissipated. Not even fear remains. It has been replaced With absolutely nothing. People ask how I'm doing And I say, "Better today." But I'm not. Raw emotion was Replaced. With emptiness. I'd rather feel everything Than nothing at all.
Written a couple of weeks after I had a miscarriage and a subsequent breakup a day after my loss. Happy to say I’ve come a long way since I wrote this poem…still hurt sometimes though.
caroliinamariia
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Oct 27, 2021
Oct 27, 2021 at 3:28 PM UTC
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