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There is no more painful love than unrequited love A heart that is open pouring out to another but an empty space like a vacuum with nothing in return Like giving a gift ‘Tis better to give than receive And the heart offers freely all of its wonderful presents Free of expectations when truly filled with love It blindly releases itself to another With a simple creed ‘I am for you’ Like the wall of a dam suddenly letting go A deluge of emotions Thoughtful, interest, caring, warmth, love A flowing waterfall of Niagara proportions However, without intention which goes without saying since the truer the love the blinder it be The vacated space creates a sudden vacuum A sharp, deep pit left where once all of itself was housed For a brief time the heart is unaware still glowing in the warmth from the happiness and joy of the love it gives But slowly the glow fades And the presence of the empty space becomes more obvious and apparent A coldness sets in An addict looking for a fix The heart desperately seeks in return what it has given Never intending to give with strings but so it finds itself now tied to another with the strongest of bonds The intense fulfilling feeling once experienced Replaced with anguish, longing, loneliness and pain The mind and heart begin an epic civil war Feeling the torment and seeing the destruction the mind invokes all its resources to break the bonds the heart has created But with hope that is almost sad and pitiful the heart refuses to let go So sure of the ties it made And fighting back with all of its might to defeat any attempt the mind has to remove the bonds of love A man at war with himself will find himself at war with others And so, the inner conflict resonates outwardly displayed aptly with defiance and destruction Like a pebble in a pond each action creates ripples Slowly at first but then with exponential speed a life is destroyed leaving only a broken and beaten shell And after all the destruction and loss All of the pain and suffering The tears and sorrow At this moment standing on a pile of nothing but debris The mind, with a sense of arrogance and certainty, confronts the heart and pointedly asks, “Do you see now?! Do you see the error of your ways?? Look what it has cost us! Do you see the mistake you’ve made?!” Without hesitation or waiver the heart responds with a steady certainty that is calm and cool in nature, “No. Love is a risky venture. One always, ‘takes a chance at love’. But I will not admit fault for trying. When I love I love freely and openly I offer all of myself without expectations It’s only when you get involved and create conflict within that we have problems To love is to love It brings joy and happiness within itself If it is not returned then it is not returned but an open and loving heart can not feel emptiness and pain for it is filled with love And there is no greater reward than finding that love in another and having another find that love in you
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Nov 8, 2018
Nov 8, 2018 at 11:32 AM UTC
Unrequited Love
There is no more painful love than unrequited love A heart that is open pouring out to another but an empty space like a vacuum with nothing in return Like giving a gift ‘Tis better to give than receive And the heart offers freely all of its wonderful presents Free of expectations when truly filled with love It blindly releases itself to another With a simple creed ‘I am for you’ Like the wall of a dam suddenly letting go A deluge of emotions Thoughtful, interest, caring, warmth, love A flowing waterfall of Niagara proportions However, without intention which goes without saying since the truer the love the blinder it be The vacated space creates a sudden vacuum A sharp, deep pit left where once all of itself was housed For a brief time the heart is unaware still glowing in the warmth from the happiness and joy of the love it gives But slowly the glow fades And the presence of the empty space becomes more obvious and apparent A coldness sets in An addict looking for a fix The heart desperately seeks in return what it has given Never intending to give with strings but so it finds itself now tied to another with the strongest of bonds The intense fulfilling feeling once experienced Replaced with anguish, longing, loneliness and pain The mind and heart begin an epic civil war Feeling the torment and seeing the destruction the mind invokes all its resources to break the bonds the heart has created But with hope that is almost sad and pitiful the heart refuses to let go So sure of the ties it made And fighting back with all of its might to defeat any attempt the mind has to remove the bonds of love A man at war with himself will find himself at war with others And so, the inner conflict resonates outwardly displayed aptly with defiance and destruction Like a pebble in a pond each action creates ripples Slowly at first but then with exponential speed a life is destroyed leaving only a broken and beaten shell And after all the destruction and loss All of the pain and suffering The tears and sorrow At this moment standing on a pile of nothing but debris The mind, with a sense of arrogance and certainty, confronts the heart and pointedly asks, “Do you see now?! Do you see the error of your ways?? Look what it has cost us! Do you see the mistake you’ve made?!” Without hesitation or waiver the heart responds with a steady certainty that is calm and cool in nature, “No. Love is a risky venture. One always, ‘takes a chance at love’. But I will not admit fault for trying. When I love I love freely and openly I offer all of myself without expectations It’s only when you get involved and create conflict within that we have problems To love is to love It brings joy and happiness within itself If it is not returned then it is not returned but an open and loving heart can not feel emptiness and pain for it is filled with love And there is no greater reward than finding that love in another and having another find that love in you
Life ***** Because there is to much Unrequited love
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Nov 8, 2018
Nov 8, 2018 at 11:32 AM UTC
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