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I’m just, tired. That’s what you tell people, I need some sleep that’s all, Well I’ve been just tired for about 6 months or so now, And the feeling is just foul, It’s just not easy, Leaves me needy, No matter how long I sleep, I’m still just tired, Still need some more sleep, The world has opened to me, The sick twisted horrors this world is now revealing, To be honest, Suicide has never been more appealing, I’m a depressed mess. But still all they hear is, I’m just tired, I just need some more sleep, Because I’m just tired, I just need some more sleep, Or someone to take that leap, Have a conversation with me so deep, Find out I use the dark nights to weep, Cos all I want to do is sleep, forever. Because I’m just tired, of everything.
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May 18, 2018
May 18, 2018 at 6:31 PM UTC
Tired
I’m just, tired. That’s what you tell people, I need some sleep that’s all, Well I’ve been just tired for about 6 months or so now, And the feeling is just foul, It’s just not easy, Leaves me needy, No matter how long I sleep, I’m still just tired, Still need some more sleep, The world has opened to me, The sick twisted horrors this world is now revealing, To be honest, Suicide has never been more appealing, I’m a depressed mess. But still all they hear is, I’m just tired, I just need some more sleep, Because I’m just tired, I just need some more sleep, Or someone to take that leap, Have a conversation with me so deep, Find out I use the dark nights to weep, Cos all I want to do is sleep, forever. Because I’m just tired, of everything.
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#suicide#losthope#givenup#tired#sleep
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Marstonj15
17/M/England
May 18, 2018
May 18, 2018 at 6:31 PM UTC
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