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Today was my greatest accomplishment, An achievement round which I rally And yet you're another absentee. I drank from the pool of triumphs sweet, Bitter as you would not share with me For instead you're another absentee Do not mistake their value is rare to me But it seems an incomplete victory Without you, Absentee
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Nov 10, 2016
Nov 10, 2016 at 7:08 AM UTC
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Today was my greatest accomplishment, An achievement round which I rally And yet you're another absentee. I drank from the pool of triumphs sweet, Bitter as you would not share with me For instead you're another absentee Do not mistake their value is rare to me But it seems an incomplete victory Without you, Absentee
After having climed and descended mt. Bogong. There is phone signal at the top and it was a moment I shared, but not with everyone I wish I could have
Tasman
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Nov 10, 2016
Nov 10, 2016 at 7:08 AM UTC
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