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From the suburban trap I could never call home, I speed through the freeway. I could not possibly be late for a little rendezvous with a lover — My lover being the city With its promises preserved in concrete. I see the skyline from afar, lined with towers and smog And I feel alive the way lovers do with one another. And before I know it, I'm cruising along avenues Uniform houses of white turn to skyscrapers, I feel the subway slither beneath, filled with all kinds of stories, As my heart beats to the footsteps of pedestrians. And I stop at the main thoroughfare, What was once the dull light I've always known Now shines through an urban prism And muted hues turn to vibrant, living colors. And I am here in the glorious city, I am looking at a mirage of light and sound, In all its color, I hear it speak to me: You are alive, you are alive.
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Jul 30, 2016
Jul 30, 2016 at 10:55 AM UTC
Downtown Dream
From the suburban trap I could never call home, I speed through the freeway. I could not possibly be late for a little rendezvous with a lover — My lover being the city With its promises preserved in concrete. I see the skyline from afar, lined with towers and smog And I feel alive the way lovers do with one another. And before I know it, I'm cruising along avenues Uniform houses of white turn to skyscrapers, I feel the subway slither beneath, filled with all kinds of stories, As my heart beats to the footsteps of pedestrians. And I stop at the main thoroughfare, What was once the dull light I've always known Now shines through an urban prism And muted hues turn to vibrant, living colors. And I am here in the glorious city, I am looking at a mirage of light and sound, In all its color, I hear it speak to me: You are alive, you are alive.
We were tasked to write poems based on paintings for my creative writing class. This is based on Eternal Love Of Light by Silvia Hartmann.
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Jul 30, 2016
Jul 30, 2016 at 10:55 AM UTC
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