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I don't want to live in a daydream Scraping my hands on suburban kitchen tiles Repeating the same delusional point, dumb pointless fantasies Neatly compartmentalised, perfectly narcissistic I thought this rollercoaster ride wasn't happening anymore Always crashing in the same car, circling back over the same forgetful insights If it's any consolation, I'm disappointed in myself too I love you, but I'm just not tall enough to go on this ride yet And maybe I never will be We are small, we are exasperated and broke together But only one of us isn't inarticulate or delusional And it isn't the one seeing me for who I really am in the present Sorry. These feelings are gross and vain I want to banish them, cut them out of me and plant them back in the ground This is the stuff that ruins marriages I love you I love you I love you But I'm not even good at writing poems.
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Mar 22
Mar 22, 2026 at 8:52 AM UTC
idontwanttoliveinadaydream
This isn't a change in structure It's barely a change in style Is this all we have? Won't you give us a smile? Exile on main street But only for a while I thought it would last forever We're so upwardly mobile Our paths of glory Have been wrecked with war There's no more safety net History's obscured A haunted building A has been hotel The paint is cracked and dry Bullet holes, oh well I thought I would grow old here Privilege has downsides I don’t want to be rich I’m institutionalised Goodbye Riverlea Hello suburban silence And bye Eldorado Park Quiet can be violence Please don't be so loud I don't feel at ease Two cars just passed my gate Think I should call the police I just can’t konnekt All I see is the future Another lost flyboy Looking for a culture I know once it's lost it's never found.
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Jan 5
Jan 5, 2026 at 2:18 PM UTC
Konnek
Synthetic lawn radioactive pine With a retractable garden hose & A 1 car garage Offset With pearly laminate and a bare wooden gate The doorbell is now A zoom monitor & The dog Is in its plastic hut in the corridor While The child in the upper window plays Minecraft Alone with the halls silent with decadent dust They turned my childhood home into a mausaleum, But the truth is, it was no better then. We were still suffocating in the immense nothing
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Sep 18, 2023
Sep 18, 2023 at 5:48 AM UTC
Cul-de-sac
blue house brown house tan house brown house blue house brown house brown house brown house backyard inside the fence rocks inside of rivets dead grass and rocks inside rivets rocks inside rivets bridge over tracks bridge over trails bridge over the river bridge over rails parking lot parking lot parking lot parking lot high school called a dead man’s name circle avenue court lane
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Apr 13, 2021
Apr 13, 2021 at 9:33 PM UTC
a drive around town
Let's take a dive through my home estate, a place I've tried to escape since my first brainwave. I'll show you flat roofs and wayward avenues, shopping trolleys that become steeds at two in the morning next to mowed down greenery lying abandoned due to overuse. I used to deliver newspapers along this route. This spot, right here, has a great Wrekin view. Back in my youth, it reminded me of you - new roads, new horizons, new people to meet. Let's keep moving to the end of the street where a house is sent letters from the wicked government, asking a mother if she's recovered from her own ill head. Like her bed is four-poster when she can barely pay rent. Her pathway displays a name written in cement. Our descent continues with the drop-offs at Maccies. A clock towers over us while we're waiting for taxis to take us out of this place and onto higher plains with house party nights and endless summer days. But our dreams remain chained like bicycle frames, The keys are locked away, we pray in cars under stars, they say we can be anything we want to be. Such as royalty, or prime minister of this great country, if we work as hard as anyone who's born into money. So we hunt for hidden weaponry, hoping they see our cannon fire and where spirits only fade, there will one day be a parade.
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Sep 8, 2020
Sep 8, 2020 at 2:53 PM UTC
One Life In Donnington
at a bend in the night (early in your sleep program) our vermin stained rancor batters its ****** limbs upon your double glazed windows we kick a thistling up your vents putting 'the ghoul' up your lightly clothed backs and disrupting your 'conditioned' environment scattering the lawn toys our demented energy aggressively makes collage the muted spirit of your suburbs all of your 'homeware' ignites nothing true just taking options out on your own life packaging our baying notes our rapid chatter reminds the family homes that they are only snug for now for they remain subject to nature and due reprimand our message :   conclude evacuate and leave ruin
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Feb 5, 2020
Feb 5, 2020 at 10:41 PM UTC
[] suburbs []
The sun sinks differently under an undisturbed skyline. I wonder if it has something to do with my eye-line, With the way I want things to happen on my time; The sun should set when I want and rise only when I co-sign. Here in suburbia time moves slow. The sun moves at a half-time pace and so do the days. I wonder if I’m missing out skipping out looking out for what’s racing past. In New York all time seems to do is pass But here it moves Slow. I wonder if I wonder too much. No time to wonder or wander in a city too full of too many too much too fast too busy I have to do do do before the day leaves me behind— Here, I leave the sun behind. Or it leaves me. Sometimes, time moves so slow I can’t tell if I’m rushing or dragging But I know that I’m moving and I think that may be enough. I look up again and the sun has set. Today, it must be enough.
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Jan 3, 2020
Jan 3, 2020 at 2:50 PM UTC
sunsets in suburbia
I've lived in the outskirts all my life I've met in the outskirts my friends and my wife I've built in the outskirts a comfortable hive I'll make in the outskirts my kids, four or five I've been here in outskirts both night and day I went to school, college, work in the same place I've never been made aware of any other way Than the one I've been using in outsirkts again and again The outskirts are comfortable, the outskirts are safe Nothing's ever going down there, neither good nor bad There is no grand ambition behind its bland face No life goals or life to love behind its made bed In outskirts I've lived, loved, ate, ****** slept, dreamt, hated, berated, been bored and amused, adored and abused, depleted, exhausted, destroyed and rebuilt, encouraged and spewed, all encompassing comfort of life's dullest views The outskirts are comfortable, they are always secure In outskirts I've lived my whole life and more All outskirts look the same, but mine is the best For my outskirts is where my humble home stands
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Aug 8, 2019
Aug 8, 2019 at 4:57 AM UTC
The Outskirts
85 and off the ladder picking leaves from the gutter Wife soon after They found her dentures on the kitchen tile A few weeks later the neighbor still in her sunhat and green gloves hose running in her hand Felled by a bee hiding in her marigolds. Then her dog, Went to live with someone else But wouldn’t eat. Wasn’t long before the flowers went too. Eaten up in the dried, cracked soil. The houses went up for sale Little signs sitting innocently In the front lawns: “So & So Realty” Pretty soon some lovely young couples moved in Had children Bought a dog Cleaned gutters Planted more marigolds Watched the rain run down The window And the reaper grinned A little More than usual.
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May 14, 2019
May 14, 2019 at 6:35 PM UTC
Suburbia, Everywhere, Everlasting
Gravel mounds in the mist Are the mountain ranges of fantasy, Spring green, eerie seen Through commuter train windows. Pitched roofs recede Into infinite distance, And junkyard parking lots are legion In the gray suburban obscurity. Factories and landfills loom, Monuments and mausoleums, The labor and the leavings Of the little colossi.
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May 2, 2019
May 2, 2019 at 9:50 AM UTC
Little Colossi
The day of the site visit I hurried out at six fifteen to wait For a train with a waning moon, Bright Venus and Jupiter hovering Above the skyline. The amber horizon Turned to orange and pink As scattered stars went dim. Misread the schedule and arrived Downtown three quarters of an hour Before my Electric District connection. An accidental gift to self. I ascended, ate two breakfast sandwiches I got for one dollar with a coupon, Warm in my hands on a blue picnic table. The sky grew light Above the Lake and I wandered Through Millennium Park. It was empty Or nearly, which felt the same. The sun broke the bent horizon In chrome and ice. I took some pictures, Then descended to find Track Five. The day's light revealed Hollow houses with cartoon stone applied Like paint, unable to compete For preeminence with two-car garages. The newest were bigger and offered In different colors, but all the same. Driving conditions were excellent. At sunset I stood on another platform Above a busy highway. The last rays came Through tree branches and melted Into the pale sky as they left my face. I had witnessed that sun's birth, It had warmed me while I waited for my carpool, Rested with me on a concrete planter after lunch. I entered the city in darkness A second time. Changed muddy boots For clean shoes and hurried to the museum. It was a free night, overcrowded With families and children, so difficult To find a quiet corner for contemplation, Any sanctuary for my own small soul. I descended, discovered the typewriters, then Realized you and I were already there, just In different colors, using different words, Spending school vacation to view old paintings And the Holiday Miniature Rooms. It dawned and the future was brighter even As I left the city in darkness.
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Jan 15, 2019
Jan 15, 2019 at 3:29 PM UTC
The Day of the Site Visit
The day of the site visit I hurried out at six fifteen to wait For a train with a waning moon, Bright Venus and Jupiter hovering Above the skyline. The amber horizon Turned to orange and pink As scattered stars went dim. Misread the schedule and arrived Downtown three quarters of an hour Before my Electric District connection. An accidental gift to self. I ascended, ate two breakfast sandwiches I got for one dollar with a coupon, Warm in my hands on a blue picnic table. The sky grew light Above the Lake and I wandered Through Millennium Park. It was empty Or nearly, which felt the same. The sun broke the bent horizon In chrome and ice. I took some pictures, Then descended to find Track Five. The day's light revealed Hollow houses with cartoon stone applied Like paint, unable to compete For preeminence with two-car garages. The newest were bigger and offered In different colors, but all the same. Driving conditions were excellent. At sunset I stood on another platform Above a busy highway. The last rays came Through tree branches and melted Into the pale sky as they left my face. I had witnessed that sun's birth, It had warmed me while I waited for my carpool, Rested with me on a concrete planter after lunch. I entered the city in darkness A second time. Changed muddy boots For clean shoes and hurried to the museum. It was a free night, overcrowded With families and children, so difficult To find a quiet corner for contemplation, Any sanctuary for my own small soul. I descended, discovered the typewriters, then Realized you and I were already there, just In different colors, using different words, Spending school vacation to view old paintings And the Holiday Miniature Rooms. It dawned and the future was brighter even As I left the city in darkness.
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The problem with people-watching in the middling suburbs outside Pittsburgh, is everyone looks like they’re related, a little too similar, bad photocopies of the same dull morality. The girls have similar haircuts and the boys wear similar shorts. The men and women, they cannot stomach the ‘F’ word, but they adore efficient order enforced through totalitarian violence. Chemical air fresheners are pumped through department store ventilation systems. Perhaps the compound is designed to induce complacency for the status quo and suppress everyone's style or sense of fashion.
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May 19, 2018
May 19, 2018 at 12:12 PM UTC
Doldrums
4 days in the suburbs everything I utter has the same cough every itch remains hidden there is this thought stuck in a glass jar. these days an image of her eyes and 25 dollars can make me run faster than any automobile but no one here runs anywhere. what is that song I used to listen to — the one about stillness? It exists here on a slow suburban morning.
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May 13, 2018
May 13, 2018 at 3:58 PM UTC
on a porch in the afternoon
We climb power lines and play Titanic. We go to parties, but only for the free food. We sneak out to people watch at Walmart. We're the whirlwind couple everyone dreams about. We're what they don't show in movies.
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Apr 11, 2018
Apr 11, 2018 at 7:05 PM UTC
we're the brad and angelina of the suburbs.
Suburbia greeted me with pale hands in my late teens. She was a wasteland in a mini skirt; in its’ own right it could be called a Cave with Plato egregiously driving his brand-new Prius 90 miles an hour saying “this is really living as long as you don’t look back” and all you can do is nod your head vigorously because the twisted **** that had settled surreptitiously in your baby lungs was giving you daylight hallucinations. My endeavors didn’t end there when they should have. There was something uncanny about the way streetlights gave you the eternal glare. Of creating ordinary neighborhood streets appear like you’ve been there before in a dream, in another body. In a dazed stupor the sounds of a television and a light coming from a garage is forgiving in your misguided attempts to be comfortable in a foreign space. It could almost feel like home when your repressed trauma keeps resurfacing while you’re trying to introduce yourself. Almost. In these polite badlands with everything uniformed the people I met were always trying to stand out from the serene landscapes. Sitting in plaid couches I was giddy playing the nihilist. Rerun episodes of Portlandia playing but all I remember from that smoky room were brown pants that looked extremely crisp to the touch and I wanted to reach out my hands and see if they would crunch under the paperweight of my heavy palms. I didn’t but I’m sure they would’ve emitted the sound of potato chips being eaten in a frenzy. When I wasn’t walking through dark rooms feeling through what could have been hallways, a family’s living room or the cool gates of hell I was meandering my way through drowsy parties where boys with the names like Dusty and Slaughter were prevalent. Each with their own bizarre story about how they stole their parents’ money one night and took off spontaneously. Driving all the way to Nevada with nothing but half a tank of gas and one pack of cigarettes. You could almost pinpoint their personalities by the type of cigarettes they smoked. Most of them holding different colored American Spirits. Had I been smarter I would have asked for a light and a smoke. Never mind that I was always deadly afraid that I had some undiagnosed lung disease and that asphyxiation was my biggest fear or that I had a pack of Marlboro black menthols in my purse that were over a year old. I found my corner sitting in a worn outdoors chair. The ones where the armrest comes built in with a cupholder. My beer ice cold sitting awkwardly sideways while I tried to consider why the host of the party was wealthy yet so hostile. My favorite party game was the one where I took hit after hit of joints being passed around until I was crazy glued to my chair and my brain started to feel like a lagoon that continued to melt into a Campbell’s soup I once had as a child. Everyone completely unaware of the horror that the house had become to me. Somewhere in the distance I was acutely aware of who I would go home with, why my ventures into the suburbs had sparked my intrigue in the first place. The only reason why I had endured feeling like a spider watching a **** film and why I had lost my virginity just a day before. I was a displaced specimen thinking about her ***** in a room of 30 people or more.
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Oct 16, 2017
Oct 16, 2017 at 2:20 PM UTC
Rustled Feathers
Suburbia greeted me with pale hands in my late teens. She was a wasteland in a mini skirt; in its’ own right it could be called a Cave with Plato egregiously driving his brand-new Prius 90 miles an hour saying “this is really living as long as you don’t look back” and all you can do is nod your head vigorously because the twisted **** that had settled surreptitiously in your baby lungs was giving you daylight hallucinations. My endeavors didn’t end there when they should have. There was something uncanny about the way streetlights gave you the eternal glare. Of creating ordinary neighborhood streets appear like you’ve been there before in a dream, in another body. In a dazed stupor the sounds of a television and a light coming from a garage is forgiving in your misguided attempts to be comfortable in a foreign space. It could almost feel like home when your repressed trauma keeps resurfacing while you’re trying to introduce yourself. Almost. In these polite badlands with everything uniformed the people I met were always trying to stand out from the serene landscapes. Sitting in plaid couches I was giddy playing the nihilist. Rerun episodes of Portlandia playing but all I remember from that smoky room were brown pants that looked extremely crisp to the touch and I wanted to reach out my hands and see if they would crunch under the paperweight of my heavy palms. I didn’t but I’m sure they would’ve emitted the sound of potato chips being eaten in a frenzy. When I wasn’t walking through dark rooms feeling through what could have been hallways, a family’s living room or the cool gates of hell I was meandering my way through drowsy parties where boys with the names like Dusty and Slaughter were prevalent. Each with their own bizarre story about how they stole their parents’ money one night and took off spontaneously. Driving all the way to Nevada with nothing but half a tank of gas and one pack of cigarettes. You could almost pinpoint their personalities by the type of cigarettes they smoked. Most of them holding different colored American Spirits. Had I been smarter I would have asked for a light and a smoke. Never mind that I was always deadly afraid that I had some undiagnosed lung disease and that asphyxiation was my biggest fear or that I had a pack of Marlboro black menthols in my purse that were over a year old. I found my corner sitting in a worn outdoors chair. The ones where the armrest comes built in with a cupholder. My beer ice cold sitting awkwardly sideways while I tried to consider why the host of the party was wealthy yet so hostile. My favorite party game was the one where I took hit after hit of joints being passed around until I was crazy glued to my chair and my brain started to feel like a lagoon that continued to melt into a Campbell’s soup I once had as a child. Everyone completely unaware of the horror that the house had become to me. Somewhere in the distance I was acutely aware of who I would go home with, why my ventures into the suburbs had sparked my intrigue in the first place. The only reason why I had endured feeling like a spider watching a **** film and why I had lost my virginity just a day before. I was a displaced specimen thinking about her ***** in a room of 30 people or more.
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There’s a horror in the city but it’s always Halloween in someone’s basement in the suburbs the closets are inundated with skeletons each dressed in friendly attire but never opening the door the neighbors always watching through sheer curtains binoculars at the ready instead of candy on doorsteps there’s signs of beware of the maniac with the pistol locked and loaded watching the 6’oclock news no apocalypse is breaking into our windows tonight there’s a hum and it’s making all the locals go mad they still haven’t figured out it’s the cicadas not demons in their trees looking for a discount lunch the desert is a harsh place when the sun is drawn sloppily on the right hand corner of a page the houses all uniformed for the drought to come each manicured lawn is a haunting for the unemployed drunk in the nearby trailer park the ghosts of those whose Christmas doesn’t come in stockings but stalking and restraining orders the spookiest part is not the slasher hotels or the creature feature shows at the bars and clubs but the calm, serene and unsettling manner in which everyone congregates on Sunday morning to be cleansed of impurities, each smile stretching farther and farther until the seconds drip into communion wine until the hours dissolve in one’s mouth like god’s flesh reinvented, resuscitated, resurrected Arise, my brothers for the pastor is watching there’s a twinkle in his eyes and there are boys missing after every ceremony but no one questions why
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Jul 14, 2017
Jul 14, 2017 at 11:45 PM UTC
onion fiction
There’s a horror in the city but it’s always Halloween in someone’s basement in the suburbs the closets are inundated with skeletons each dressed in friendly attire but never opening the door the neighbors always watching through sheer curtains binoculars at the ready instead of candy on doorsteps there’s signs of beware of the maniac with the pistol locked and loaded watching the 6’oclock news no apocalypse is breaking into our windows tonight there’s a hum and it’s making all the locals go mad they still haven’t figured out it’s the cicadas not demons in their trees looking for a discount lunch the desert is a harsh place when the sun is drawn sloppily on the right hand corner of a page the houses all uniformed for the drought to come each manicured lawn is a haunting for the unemployed drunk in the nearby trailer park the ghosts of those whose Christmas doesn’t come in stockings but stalking and restraining orders the spookiest part is not the slasher hotels or the creature feature shows at the bars and clubs but the calm, serene and unsettling manner in which everyone congregates on Sunday morning to be cleansed of impurities, each smile stretching farther and farther until the seconds drip into communion wine until the hours dissolve in one’s mouth like god’s flesh reinvented, resuscitated, resurrected Arise, my brothers for the pastor is watching there’s a twinkle in his eyes and there are boys missing after every ceremony but no one questions why
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