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A two word couple rarely used In genuine terms, at least But all too often, more than abused Never in response to treat And apologies are just the same Said so carelessly, so carefree Follows suit after a name But meaningless, sadly What are words without their meaning? When used out of context It meant something at the beginning But the question is what’s next? Will opinions come to have no value? How about symbols, or hand signals? As I said, use and abuse So used the tongue does tingle Compare that to human life What makes us so unique? We all have opinions and advice And without being asked, openly critique We push others down so we can get up Why don’t we just learn to swim? So we can go for long enough Without bending someone to our whim A life forced to enforce our own Power corrupts, and corrupts absolutely And these maddened actions we must condone And do so resolutely. Why do we keep ruining lives? Not just others, but also our own We punish either with words like knives And suffer all alone I preferred to shut my mouth And say what doesn’t need saying Everything would be what I’d talk about But my emotions just kept on praying Hiding behind a veil That was a master façade My smile hid all detail So to myself I said “Au Revoir” But they could not hide forever My darkness lifted a little So I tried piecing myself together Labelled “Handle with Caution, for I am Brittle.” But despite how hard I tried I failed to be whole My best interests were defied And darkness enveloped my soul What I once hid behind Was now a part of me When I realised, I died inside And self-consciously admit defeat My hands guided by hatred For the weakness that was within Energy so sapped I became faded And my Nightmares would soon begin For a year I found it hard to sleep As I watched my friends be Butchered With woe and sorrow I began to weep In helplessness I was snookered My friend had an idea for me One I never dreamt To try and incite a lucid dream And to have my promise be kept That I would protect my friends No matter what the cost A brave mental battle, with no happier end And once done, I knew all was not lost But inside my mind I found my meaning Even through my lack of dreaming That life is best had when not sleeping And reminiscing memories of bleeding Life is an experience That defines who you are Fill it with extravagance And man will you go far
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Jun 16, 2016
Jun 16, 2016 at 7:06 AM UTC
Definition
A two word couple rarely used In genuine terms, at least But all too often, more than abused Never in response to treat And apologies are just the same Said so carelessly, so carefree Follows suit after a name But meaningless, sadly What are words without their meaning? When used out of context It meant something at the beginning But the question is what’s next? Will opinions come to have no value? How about symbols, or hand signals? As I said, use and abuse So used the tongue does tingle Compare that to human life What makes us so unique? We all have opinions and advice And without being asked, openly critique We push others down so we can get up Why don’t we just learn to swim? So we can go for long enough Without bending someone to our whim A life forced to enforce our own Power corrupts, and corrupts absolutely And these maddened actions we must condone And do so resolutely. Why do we keep ruining lives? Not just others, but also our own We punish either with words like knives And suffer all alone I preferred to shut my mouth And say what doesn’t need saying Everything would be what I’d talk about But my emotions just kept on praying Hiding behind a veil That was a master façade My smile hid all detail So to myself I said “Au Revoir” But they could not hide forever My darkness lifted a little So I tried piecing myself together Labelled “Handle with Caution, for I am Brittle.” But despite how hard I tried I failed to be whole My best interests were defied And darkness enveloped my soul What I once hid behind Was now a part of me When I realised, I died inside And self-consciously admit defeat My hands guided by hatred For the weakness that was within Energy so sapped I became faded And my Nightmares would soon begin For a year I found it hard to sleep As I watched my friends be Butchered With woe and sorrow I began to weep In helplessness I was snookered My friend had an idea for me One I never dreamt To try and incite a lucid dream And to have my promise be kept That I would protect my friends No matter what the cost A brave mental battle, with no happier end And once done, I knew all was not lost But inside my mind I found my meaning Even through my lack of dreaming That life is best had when not sleeping And reminiscing memories of bleeding Life is an experience That defines who you are Fill it with extravagance And man will you go far
Or perhaps would this be better for my assignment than "Too Much, Too Little" or "Remember?" Please let me know
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26/Trans Female
Jun 16, 2016
Jun 16, 2016 at 7:06 AM UTC
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