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I love the idea of smoke, the fumes clinging to my lungs and the exasperated gasp to regain air. The smoke that can burn down a home, a place filled with memories to be ruined, ashes of forgotten darkness. A smoke that can be a sign, a scream for help and danger. A reassurance to others of your struggle. I like your smoke, the intoxication of your breath, mixing with mine in a moment of relief. Before the bitter after taste of realisation. For nothing can bring me joy, nothing more than smoke can make me suffer.
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Jan 23, 2016
Jan 23, 2016 at 1:45 PM UTC
Intoxication
I love the idea of smoke, the fumes clinging to my lungs and the exasperated gasp to regain air. The smoke that can burn down a home, a place filled with memories to be ruined, ashes of forgotten darkness. A smoke that can be a sign, a scream for help and danger. A reassurance to others of your struggle. I like your smoke, the intoxication of your breath, mixing with mine in a moment of relief. Before the bitter after taste of realisation. For nothing can bring me joy, nothing more than smoke can make me suffer.
Jennifer_Childs
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22/Cisgender Female
Jan 23, 2016
Jan 23, 2016 at 1:45 PM UTC
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