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Dec 2014
I wish I could be like...
A tiger blazing through the jungle
or a wolf in a pack howling at the moon
or a duck hawk diving for the ****
Instead I am like...
The orphaned elephant soon to be killed by a lion
or a wildebeest crushed in a stampede
or a sheep, baaing pathetically, before being sheared.
my first poem is crap I know. Constructive criticism please
Written by
Rex Forté  Where I don't want to be
(Where I don't want to be)   
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   Creep, Janine, --- and WickedHope
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