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the repetition of distrust

Keeping your hands in your pockets won't keep you warm

in the cold air of a winter night

raging against the warmth of a fire and a place to rest your head

acceptance and satisfaction cracking your lips

 

The key in a puddle carved like a knife

shattering the icy calm of the little pool

reflecting the thunder clouds above your head

looming like scissors over a barely blooming rosebud

 

Calamity and discord seems to be your comfort

or are those lies I see glaring in your obtrusive eyes

silence is the last thing you could ever hear

unless it's the cries of a helpless child sighing into the night

 

Hope never abandoned you

I watched as you burned the unscented candles

the wax waning and the smoke dissapating in contempt

your fingers dancing in the last dip of flame

 

I watched you disappear into the coming season

observing the ground as you tread

leaving a dull key in that evaporated puddle

the wax molded to your hand and a burn on your palm

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Written by
lauren-ashley
American
Published
Feb 20, 2011
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Notes

not quite finished I think

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