Oct 2014
He was the grey sky during the roughest weathers
with mental afflictions as loud as thunder
and a knife as sharp as lightening
He was a darker blue than the fathomless depths of the ocean
yet had eyes just as deep
with waves that drowned out his pleas
and always kept him drowning to stay afloat
He was the night sky without the grace of stars
the lonely moon
the howl of the lost wolf
the crack of a feeble branch
he was the rain
the damp soil
the little puddle created, staring up at his relfection
with mental afflictions as loud as thunder
and a knife as sharp as lightening
He was a darker blue than the fathomless depths of the ocean
yet had eyes just as deep
with waves that drowned out his pleas
and always kept him drowning to stay afloat
He was the night sky without the grace of stars
the lonely moon
the howl of the lost wolf
the crack of a feeble branch
he was the rain
the damp soil
the little puddle created, staring up at his relfection
Writer's note:
the first stanza introduces the boy as depressed with unsettling thoughts and a motive of self harm
the second stanza shows just how depressed he was and how it affected him
the third stanza has many meanings, one being he was alone and breaking
the last stanza shows his fall/death (the rain) and jumping to the last 2 stanzas was his puddle (his blood) looking up at himself (he was the grey night sky)
the first stanza introduces the boy as depressed with unsettling thoughts and a motive of self harm
the second stanza shows just how depressed he was and how it affected him
the third stanza has many meanings, one being he was alone and breaking
the last stanza shows his fall/death (the rain) and jumping to the last 2 stanzas was his puddle (his blood) looking up at himself (he was the grey night sky)
