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Jan 2011
dear lord,

please

take me back
to where I do not belong

take me away
from where I do not belong
just a poem.

*edited on Jan 29, 2011 - as suggested by jermaine. Thank you for your input.

*original version:

dear lord,
you have
two choices.

one -
take me back to where I do not belong
and never release me again.

two -
take me away from where I do not belong
and never bring me back.

basically -
they are
the same thing.

please have mercy.
make your decision
quickly.
Lila Lily-Thanh
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Lila Lily-Thanh  Fall Foliage Winter Winds
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