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Lila Lily-Thanh
Poems
Jan 2011
dear lord
dear lord,
please
take me back
to where I do not belong
take me away
from where I do not belong
just a poem.
*edited on Jan 29, 2011 - as suggested by jermaine. Thank you for your input.
*original version:
dear lord,
you have
two choices.
one -
take me back to where I do not belong
and never release me again.
two -
take me away from where I do not belong
and never bring me back.
basically -
they are
the same thing.
please have mercy.
make your decision
quickly.
Written by
Lila Lily-Thanh
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