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Oct 2014
It's okay
for you to take my glass heart
Grab it from behind and
Hold it close and dearly
Then fling it across the room.

It's okay for
You to shake up my world
And block up my whole tunnel vision
View cause I was drunk on you.
For you to take everything and never
Give it back.

But it is not okay
For you to enchant her,
Enrapture her,
Then **** her
The way you did to me.
Don't hurt another helpless soul
That has fallen into your handsome
Abyss of obvious never ending doom.
Gosh I feel like obvious is such an unpoetic word... Is it just me? Lol sounds out of place but whatever... Idk kinda wrote this out of whim... Any suggestions on how to revise?
Creep
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