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Joseph Perales
Poems
Jan 2011
My Own Biggest Critic
I am my own biggest critic
second thoughts; parasitic
with eyes harshly analytic
leave my hand paralytic
my pen has become sedentary
words wonβt come as necessary
what used to be so elementary
no longer comes as secondary
I read and re-read obsessively
I write and re-write aggressively
until a poem forms progressively
until a poem forms successfully
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