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Michael S Simpson
Poems
Jan 2011
Bold Critique (revised)
One piece of punctuation would
end this poem as it should:
a "." would make it good--
that is, at least I think it could
@%D
Written by
Michael S Simpson
74/M/Grass Valley, California
(74/M/Grass Valley, California)
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