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Aug 2014
I know you have kids to feed,
But I must say what I need,
I am no thief,
I did not steal from you,
And our boss already finished the deal,
I owned what I worked for,
You don't get to carry the sins of the father,
unto the son. Because it suits you.

You curse the dealership for approving deals,
That make you lose money in peels,
But you want my losers,
You have to ask everyone for yours,
I earn mine, and never have to ask anyone.

Please stop accosting me.
Do not tell me, that my father thinks I am Greedy,
Do not tell me that I don't know anything,
That what comes around goes around,
Do not call me, The kinkiest ******* you know,
And say you wont do buisness with me,
Any more,
And then keep coming to me,
And lecturing me,
And riling me up,
And stressing me,
And making my heart burst up,

Leave me alone.
Fight someone else,
To get what you think is yours,
While I'll sleep soundly,
Maybe tomorrow,
Knowing I did what was right.
Hey John, I saw your comment on Dickinson's "I watched the moon around the house". You didn't like it. It's actually an astounding poem. I read your caption above and it said you're the best poet ever. Your poems are forceful, but they have no subtlety. There's almost no nuance or strength of compassion. They come off bitter, emotionally distant; very ineffective wording. They're unforgettable, and they're pretty much a turn off. However, if you DO take this criticism to heart, you might become a decent poet in a couple years. Good luck :)
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