When I was eleven, my name was Sadie. When I was eleven I lived on the streets. I was unloved. I was unwanted. I was unseen. I was unheard. I had not a single person in the world who cared for me. I no reason to live my life. I had nothing to fight for. I was alone. When I was eleven I made a choice that changed my life forever. When I was eleven I made a choice that set me on the path to adventures beyond my wildest dreams and heartache of my worst nightmares. My new name is A’ratos I’nima, or Brave Heart. My home is the spaceship T’arm, or Haven. My species is human. My family is made up of alien bounty hunters and merchants. I am loved. I am wanted. I am seen. I am heard. I have an entire starship of aliens who care for me. I have a mate who loves me. I have a child who adores me. I have two reasons to live my life. I have a war to fight with my star born family. I will never be alone ever again. I was Sadie, a street kid with no future. I am A’ratos I’nima, a Space Merchant with a wife and daughter. I am Courage, a fledgling warrior in an old rebellion. This is my story, dare you read it?
this is basicaly the start to one of my novels. good? bad? please comment