I found her at the starting line of a new life From our first shared smile I dreamed her to be my wife Her eyes smoldered with an ember glow As her hair fell in an extinguished flow Before I could recover the time was go
I started to race before she had a chance Then passed me by with her flashing glance I tried to keep up but couldn't match pace I was too slow for her taste She craved a more challenging race
I chased and chased, slowly closing the gap Kept my head down, focused on the next lap Never stopped to study what was on my map But when I finally let my focus snap
I found my feet pounding with all of their might And my flame, was far beyond out of sight Had I ran a race that lead me astray? Ran with zeal for the past thousand days Refused to quit and allowed delay Neglected the idea: she doesn't feel the same way Never thought to think: Does she even still run this way? She phoned me from her newfound oak-pine trail And I knew then that my feat had failed
This is a work in progress. I typed this up when I was in the moment. I still haven't perfected the mood and message I want to convey. Let me know what you think so far