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Feb 2014
He come down from the mountain
He come down walkin slow

He come down from the mountain
To the town below



(But first he had to climb the mountain----
I didn't mention it---- but he did)

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See

This is NOT a CHRIST FIGURE
Cause

Jesus just come down from the sky

Nothin in the story shows him

GOIN UP !

He got "born" up there ya see

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All the streets were lined with people
Sullen staring hordes

Walkin proud he passed amongst them
He come down
He come down

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Now at this point
Like the Christ story

We see no stated purpose for the appearance

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He passes cross the plaza
Their strength is what he's lookin for

But all he sees are frightened eyes
Peering from behind each door

He come down
  He come down
He come down

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He learns!

He finds out what's goin on!

He must act according to his nature!

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Here we see the difference with the Christ story

Where Jesus starts preaching some truths

Dies

(And then it is said he CAME to die!

And actually THIS new "take" was going on from the beginning!)


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WELL!

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So

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Everybody got write their own poem AND live it

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In mine

I'm INTA dealing with all the fear I perceive

Comin from behind each door!

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But
At least I can say

IM HERE
Written by
jeffrey robin
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