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jeffrey robin
Poems
Feb 2014
rainy day song of the rain
He come down from the mountain
He come down walkin slow
He come down from the mountain
To the town below
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(But first he had to climb the mountain----
I didn't mention it---- but he did)
••
See
This is NOT a CHRIST FIGURE
Cause
Jesus just come down from the sky
Nothin in the story shows him
GOIN UP !
He got "born" up there ya see
••
All the streets were lined with people
Sullen staring hordes
Walkin proud he passed amongst them
He come down
He come down
••
Now at this point
Like the Christ story
We see no stated purpose for the appearance
••
He passes cross the plaza
Their strength is what he's lookin for
But all he sees are frightened eyes
Peering from behind each door
He come down
He come down
He come down
••
He learns!
He finds out what's goin on!
He must act according to his nature!
••
Here we see the difference with the Christ story
Where Jesus starts preaching some truths
Dies
(And then it is said he CAME to die!
And actually THIS new "take" was going on from the beginning!)
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WELL!
••
••
So
?????? ??????
Everybody got write their own poem AND live it
.••
In mine
I'm INTA dealing with all the fear I perceive
Comin from behind each door!
••
But
At least I can say
IM HERE
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jeffrey robin
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