Feb 2014
floating in neverland
she takes on new
winged form
dazzling
bright
translucent
in flight
to close
to the sun
her wings will melt
she takes on new
winged form
dazzling
bright
translucent
in flight
to close
to the sun
her wings will melt
Not happy with the end it doesn't sound quite right somehow, maybe the rhyming in the middle makes the end unsuitable somehow?
(Tasmania)
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