all the details
trying....hard
trying............so hard!
trying................too hard(?)

to please
----

the vapors that surround an uncouth dawn
are
here

prentenders to the Crown
crowd around
the Market Place
where tender children
come
hoping to understand
and showing their Faith
in a Real Tomorrow

and that they remain
amid the crying
and the dying sounds

such detail!

we try to please
vampires

and the Police

within the uncouth and vaporous dawn